for The Aftermath3/24/2011 c1 Doradu93
Ooooooh I AGREE ! The end totally ROXXS
Great job great job great job great job great job~~~~~~~
For a first fic, this is totally made of WIN
I loved it so much~ Even if I prefer what happened in the manga 3 (That means this fic is really a succes)
Ooooooh I AGREE ! The end totally ROXXS
Great job great job great job great job great job~~~~~~~
For a first fic, this is totally made of WIN
I loved it so much~ Even if I prefer what happened in the manga 3 (That means this fic is really a succes)
2/28/2011 c1 
52Dreamweaving
Not bad for a first fic. Not bad at all. It had a good ending. I look forward to your future works.
52DreamweavingNot bad for a first fic. Not bad at all. It had a good ending. I look forward to your future works.
2/26/2011 c1 14Alexandria Kennedy
Awww! This almost made me cry! (I'm kinda emotional and I love Yoite!) I love it! Great story! Adding it my favorites!
14Alexandria KennedyAwww! This almost made me cry! (I'm kinda emotional and I love Yoite!) I love it! Great story! Adding it my favorites!
2/16/2011 c1 The Self-Proclaimed Otaku
I really love how you portrayed the characters in your story. What you write seems like something they would actually say or do. The plot is also very good, and seems very realistic (in terms of the Nabari world).
There was just one awkward sentence. Other than that, this is a very good story.
I really love how you portrayed the characters in your story. What you write seems like something they would actually say or do. The plot is also very good, and seems very realistic (in terms of the Nabari world).
There was just one awkward sentence. Other than that, this is a very good story.