for What's Wrong With Merlin?9/23/2016 c2 Guest
Doubly hilarious. Gaius is not above extortion.
Doubly hilarious. Gaius is not above extortion.
9/23/2016 c1 Guest
Hilarious.
Hilarious.
3/6/2014 c1 8annie81
Awe I'm so pleased at the lighthearted tone this took. I thought his silence would have a deep and tragic meaning. :) And lol yay for our Prat of a prince getting all teasy!
Awe I'm so pleased at the lighthearted tone this took. I thought his silence would have a deep and tragic meaning. :) And lol yay for our Prat of a prince getting all teasy!
8/31/2012 c2 
5servant123
Heehee :) Very nice :) :) I'd like to see even more, though! Maybe seeing how Merlin breaks the news to Arthur that his voice is back? That could be highly amusing. Or seeing the situation reversed as a form of payback. Even just a hint of it at the end, like, "Considering the crown prince's sudden voice loss, though, perhaps he hadn't learned all that much after all..."
Anyways, for what is here, this is fabulous. Excellently written, and with a good handle on how long to stay on one scene and when to move on, as well as a great-well, perfect, really-balance between dialogue and description of the scene and characters. Keep up the awesome work :) I can't wait to read more from you! *heart*heart*heart*
God bless :)
5servant123Heehee :) Very nice :) :) I'd like to see even more, though! Maybe seeing how Merlin breaks the news to Arthur that his voice is back? That could be highly amusing. Or seeing the situation reversed as a form of payback. Even just a hint of it at the end, like, "Considering the crown prince's sudden voice loss, though, perhaps he hadn't learned all that much after all..."
Anyways, for what is here, this is fabulous. Excellently written, and with a good handle on how long to stay on one scene and when to move on, as well as a great-well, perfect, really-balance between dialogue and description of the scene and characters. Keep up the awesome work :) I can't wait to read more from you! *heart*heart*heart*
God bless :)
8/31/2012 c1 servant123
Nice work! I really had fun reading this. I think the highlight for me was that Arthur's first instinct was to mock him and then take him hunting; "All concern, out the window with you!" Heehee :) Very well-written and entertaining. *Gasp!* I just realized there's more to this :D :D I was just thinking it would've been nice to see some implied, light-hearted revenge on Merlin's part. Maybe there's some in the next chapter? ;) Keep up the awesome work! I look forward to reading lots more from you real soon :) :) :)
God bless! *heart*
Nice work! I really had fun reading this. I think the highlight for me was that Arthur's first instinct was to mock him and then take him hunting; "All concern, out the window with you!" Heehee :) Very well-written and entertaining. *Gasp!* I just realized there's more to this :D :D I was just thinking it would've been nice to see some implied, light-hearted revenge on Merlin's part. Maybe there's some in the next chapter? ;) Keep up the awesome work! I look forward to reading lots more from you real soon :) :) :)
God bless! *heart*
5/13/2012 c2 9JoyfulWhispersInternet
*gasp* Merlin can't lose his voice-there'd be no banter for an entire episode! great two shot, is this set in season 1? that's when gwen talks like that, i think.
9JoyfulWhispersInternet*gasp* Merlin can't lose his voice-there'd be no banter for an entire episode! great two shot, is this set in season 1? that's when gwen talks like that, i think.
2/21/2012 c2 jameson1155
What a cute story! I love these little 'day in the life of..' stories, where you get to smile at the antics of our favorite warlock and prat. You kept them true to themselves and it was fun to read. Thank you.
What a cute story! I love these little 'day in the life of..' stories, where you get to smile at the antics of our favorite warlock and prat. You kept them true to themselves and it was fun to read. Thank you.
10/31/2011 c2 The Voice of the Wind
FANTASTIC LOL
Humarous. THis fanfic is the bast that I've read in a long time and i mean a long time.
In short.
I loved it. Keep up the inspiring work.
FANTASTIC LOL
Humarous. THis fanfic is the bast that I've read in a long time and i mean a long time.
In short.
I loved it. Keep up the inspiring work.