for The Shadow4/21/2012 c21 
2darkmoonfairy16
I believe that was a beautiful ending to the story kind of curious if those two will ever start a family but my mind can wonder :)
2darkmoonfairy16I believe that was a beautiful ending to the story kind of curious if those two will ever start a family but my mind can wonder :)
4/20/2012 c21 87thcircleofhell
At first I kept reading because my favorite kinds of fics are when Harry mentally brakes down and no one notices. I was curious about what was plaguing Harry. And his brake down was spectacular. Then his recovery andthen you went above my expectation andadded discord between them. The anxiety that then ensued and then the happy ending. I loved it from start to finish. I love my pwp but what I really truly love is a lengthy fic I can get obsessed with and this fic was it for me. This is what I so diligently search for when I look for a new fic to read. I love your writing style, it flowsvery nice for me.
As for favorote parts, when snape found Harry on the floor of the bathroom, when snape begged Harry to stay after his nightmare, I do however wish snape had woken up when Harry did the first time when he was stroking snapes chest and pressing his hard on into his back, I don't know really loved everything.
87thcircleofhellAt first I kept reading because my favorite kinds of fics are when Harry mentally brakes down and no one notices. I was curious about what was plaguing Harry. And his brake down was spectacular. Then his recovery andthen you went above my expectation andadded discord between them. The anxiety that then ensued and then the happy ending. I loved it from start to finish. I love my pwp but what I really truly love is a lengthy fic I can get obsessed with and this fic was it for me. This is what I so diligently search for when I look for a new fic to read. I love your writing style, it flowsvery nice for me.
As for favorote parts, when snape found Harry on the floor of the bathroom, when snape begged Harry to stay after his nightmare, I do however wish snape had woken up when Harry did the first time when he was stroking snapes chest and pressing his hard on into his back, I don't know really loved everything.
4/20/2012 c11 halfbloodprincess1221
The end of this chapter just tore at my heart. Absolutely beautiful.
The end of this chapter just tore at my heart. Absolutely beautiful.
4/20/2012 c21 meg527
I really loved this story! You did a lovely job with all the characters and situations. Please keep writing! :)
I really loved this story! You did a lovely job with all the characters and situations. Please keep writing! :)
4/20/2012 c21 8CHSgrl09
aaaawwww... This story was so beautifully written. You did a great job. Can't wait to read more of your work. :)
8CHSgrl09aaaawwww... This story was so beautifully written. You did a great job. Can't wait to read more of your work. :)
4/19/2012 c21 3A.L. Cullen
Firstly I'd like to say yes you should most definitely keep writing. Secondly I read this story in 12 hours I started it and couldn't stop it was so good and very well written.
And finally my favorite parts was the dynamic of their relationship and obviously the make up sex :D Great Job you just made it onto my author alert list :D
A.L. Cullen
3A.L. CullenFirstly I'd like to say yes you should most definitely keep writing. Secondly I read this story in 12 hours I started it and couldn't stop it was so good and very well written.
And finally my favorite parts was the dynamic of their relationship and obviously the make up sex :D Great Job you just made it onto my author alert list :D
A.L. Cullen
4/19/2012 c13 A.L. Cullen
Not gonna lie I'd really like to see the smutty version of this chapter where can I find it?
Not gonna lie I'd really like to see the smutty version of this chapter where can I find it?
4/19/2012 c21 Thatsallwegot
I absolutely 100% completely and utterly love this story. Thank you so very much for writing it. You should be more than proud that you made something so amazing that it has touched people's (at least mine) souls. Thank you. I cannot wait to see anything else that you create.
I absolutely 100% completely and utterly love this story. Thank you so very much for writing it. You should be more than proud that you made something so amazing that it has touched people's (at least mine) souls. Thank you. I cannot wait to see anything else that you create.
4/18/2012 c21 2ChibiChula
I love seeing Harry and Severus find their bit of happiness together and you did a very nice job portraying them as realistically as possible given the fact that your story is AU and given their canon history. Well done!
2ChibiChulaI love seeing Harry and Severus find their bit of happiness together and you did a very nice job portraying them as realistically as possible given the fact that your story is AU and given their canon history. Well done!
4/18/2012 c21 L
It was awesome. I'm glad Harry didn't give in right away, or for that matter glad he didn't have a relapse. You didn't go with cliche and it totally worked. You kept them well in chracter, and my heart ached for Harry when he was healing and later when he was so utterly hurt by Severus. My heart ached.
It was awesome. I'm glad Harry didn't give in right away, or for that matter glad he didn't have a relapse. You didn't go with cliche and it totally worked. You kept them well in chracter, and my heart ached for Harry when he was healing and later when he was so utterly hurt by Severus. My heart ached.
4/18/2012 c21 7xxSnowxxAngelxx
*teary-eyed* awwww, such a sweet happy ending! This was a really good story! ^-^
7xxSnowxxAngelxx*teary-eyed* awwww, such a sweet happy ending! This was a really good story! ^-^
4/18/2012 c21 Total-Stranger
aww its soo sad to see this story end! you really are a great writer and I hope you keep up the good work. p.s.. I loved mcgonagall's reaction
aww its soo sad to see this story end! you really are a great writer and I hope you keep up the good work. p.s.. I loved mcgonagall's reaction
4/18/2012 c21 SanchiaSnape
I have to say that I loved the ending with the reference to the mirror - brilliant :) I really enjoyed reading this and it is saved on my iPad so I can easily read it whenever I want , well done xxx
I have to say that I loved the ending with the reference to the mirror - brilliant :) I really enjoyed reading this and it is saved on my iPad so I can easily read it whenever I want , well done xxx
4/18/2012 c12 L
I did not see that coming. "just do it" I read and wondered what is he talking about? wow, didn't see that so soon. very happy though
I did not see that coming. "just do it" I read and wondered what is he talking about? wow, didn't see that so soon. very happy though