for The Shadow7/20/2011 c13 Rufio72
This story is awesome and brilliantly written. I read the whole thing in like 2 days. But where's the smut? Can I get the unedited version? :) Or will you post it somewhere else?
This story is awesome and brilliantly written. I read the whole thing in like 2 days. But where's the smut? Can I get the unedited version? :) Or will you post it somewhere else?
7/18/2011 c6 Cainchan
I like this broken, emanciated version of Harry who is far away from sanity at the moment. Devil me ;-) I love all the angst in this chapter. thank you for sharing it.
I like this broken, emanciated version of Harry who is far away from sanity at the moment. Devil me ;-) I love all the angst in this chapter. thank you for sharing it.
7/17/2011 c14 
9ani-olic
Please write more snarry. It doesnt even have to be this story (though id love it if you did)! Your writing is amazing, so detailed and perfect. It has just enough smut and enough of a plot to make it perfectly balanced. Im favoriting you immediately and i hope there's more where this came from!
9ani-olicPlease write more snarry. It doesnt even have to be this story (though id love it if you did)! Your writing is amazing, so detailed and perfect. It has just enough smut and enough of a plot to make it perfectly balanced. Im favoriting you immediately and i hope there's more where this came from!
7/16/2011 c14 4Reader-anonymous-writer
Is the shadow related to Blood Quill or Voldemort? Ah, it's a hallucination.
He obviously wasn't a very strong willed person, and he was sick of trying to be. - You can throw off Imperio, you are strong willed.
...to talk to the man as little as possible - I don't think Professor Snape will let you off the hook so easily. Though, he will not badger either.
Good luck.
4Reader-anonymous-writerIs the shadow related to Blood Quill or Voldemort? Ah, it's a hallucination.
He obviously wasn't a very strong willed person, and he was sick of trying to be. - You can throw off Imperio, you are strong willed.
...to talk to the man as little as possible - I don't think Professor Snape will let you off the hook so easily. Though, he will not badger either.
Good luck.
7/16/2011 c14 5KW2009
Ok, firstly, why the hell would you disable anonymous reviews? No wonder this story has so few reviews. Seriously, I feel like saying some very insulting things about your brains.
Secondly, this is the first story I read after watching dh2 last night. I have to say it was a good choice. I was desperate for a snape fic after watching him die. This did him justice - just knowig he survived even if it's fanfiction! So good story love it and update soon.
5KW2009Ok, firstly, why the hell would you disable anonymous reviews? No wonder this story has so few reviews. Seriously, I feel like saying some very insulting things about your brains.
Secondly, this is the first story I read after watching dh2 last night. I have to say it was a good choice. I was desperate for a snape fic after watching him die. This did him justice - just knowig he survived even if it's fanfiction! So good story love it and update soon.
6/28/2011 c1 ObsessiveFox
Eee I'm really enjoying this storyyy but I don't see why you don't just post the graphic version here there's some reallllyyyyyy graphic sex scenes on this site already.
I love how severus is and harrys shyness this is turning out to be a fantastic story!
I cannot wait for the next chapter :DDDDD
Eee I'm really enjoying this storyyy but I don't see why you don't just post the graphic version here there's some reallllyyyyyy graphic sex scenes on this site already.
I love how severus is and harrys shyness this is turning out to be a fantastic story!
I cannot wait for the next chapter :DDDDD
6/20/2011 c13 15Vine Verrine
Well, I hope I'm not the only one to say I'm wanting an unedited version.
I still don't see why post it elsewhere, sometimes it's inconvenient having to read two sites while there is a lot of pretty explicit smut in this site. And like I told you, this is still underground fandom, so you really wouldn't get banned from the site for this.
Anyway, I liked the chapter, it seems more firm, like it has a path to walk. It was very sweet and also sensual. I like Harry and his shyness and I also like Severus being more quite, not sweet but very receptive, exactly perfect for his characterization. I'm still not confused, not even dubious about the last chapter and the one before that, but kind of... It feels like a complete different story. You still haven't told us or made some sort of elaboration on Severus' feelings. It was very abrupt and at least, it caught me by surprise, but I don't know which one, bad or good.
This chapter was really good, but I don't see a connection to the others.
But, I'm already waiting for the next chapter :DDD This one was good :BB
15Vine VerrineWell, I hope I'm not the only one to say I'm wanting an unedited version.
I still don't see why post it elsewhere, sometimes it's inconvenient having to read two sites while there is a lot of pretty explicit smut in this site. And like I told you, this is still underground fandom, so you really wouldn't get banned from the site for this.
Anyway, I liked the chapter, it seems more firm, like it has a path to walk. It was very sweet and also sensual. I like Harry and his shyness and I also like Severus being more quite, not sweet but very receptive, exactly perfect for his characterization. I'm still not confused, not even dubious about the last chapter and the one before that, but kind of... It feels like a complete different story. You still haven't told us or made some sort of elaboration on Severus' feelings. It was very abrupt and at least, it caught me by surprise, but I don't know which one, bad or good.
This chapter was really good, but I don't see a connection to the others.
But, I'm already waiting for the next chapter :DDD This one was good :BB
6/19/2011 c13 aliengirlguy
good chap! if your looking for a place to post an unedited version there is hpfandom and adultfanfiction.net, leaving links in your profile with a brief note of it existence in your next chap update or whenever, will most likely over those who want the unedited version. keem up the great work!
good chap! if your looking for a place to post an unedited version there is hpfandom and adultfanfiction.net, leaving links in your profile with a brief note of it existence in your next chap update or whenever, will most likely over those who want the unedited version. keem up the great work!
6/19/2011 c13 lauraaluu
Yeah, TOTALLY want the unedited version, do say where you'll put it!
LOVE this by the way.
Yeah, TOTALLY want the unedited version, do say where you'll put it!
LOVE this by the way.