for The Shadow1/2/2014 c21 Raynesum
Although all these stories kinda are the same mid plot; sev and harry get in a fight and sev doesn't think he's good enough but what makes the story different is the ending. How they put past their challenges. I really liked your ending, i guessed it early on but it was really sweet. I absolutely adored chapter 20's train scene, i read the passage three times and still found it humorous. Great Job!
Although all these stories kinda are the same mid plot; sev and harry get in a fight and sev doesn't think he's good enough but what makes the story different is the ending. How they put past their challenges. I really liked your ending, i guessed it early on but it was really sweet. I absolutely adored chapter 20's train scene, i read the passage three times and still found it humorous. Great Job!
12/31/2013 c21 
8Wolfisis
You dear are a freaking awesome writer you had my heart going this whole time I loved loved the ending of it.
8WolfisisYou dear are a freaking awesome writer you had my heart going this whole time I loved loved the ending of it.
10/5/2013 c21 4Keela1221
Your story was beautiful and I very much enjoyed it. Thank you for writing and sharing it
4Keela1221Your story was beautiful and I very much enjoyed it. Thank you for writing and sharing it
8/26/2013 c21 itradedyesterday
Ahhhhh! Oms! I LOVED IT!
Ahhhhh! Oms! I LOVED IT!
8/1/2013 c21 OrphndAcct
What an evasive turn of plot. Harry becoming lucid and Severus taking care of him. The simple words of "one thing lead to another and..." for your creative moment of sex. Ah, Draco you are quite the champ and would resiliently earn every sickle possible.
What an evasive turn of plot. Harry becoming lucid and Severus taking care of him. The simple words of "one thing lead to another and..." for your creative moment of sex. Ah, Draco you are quite the champ and would resiliently earn every sickle possible.
7/2/2013 c21 3Lady Gaidin
Great job. The slow development was wonderful. Draco's part was fun and he integrated himself well into the fic. Hermione and Ron were amazing friends. Lovely fic.
3Lady GaidinGreat job. The slow development was wonderful. Draco's part was fun and he integrated himself well into the fic. Hermione and Ron were amazing friends. Lovely fic.
6/18/2013 c21 Carla Balsinha
Dear Aofie,I must confess that i see severus and harry like father and son...i imagine more harry with draco and severus with hermione...
i usually dont read severus and harry but i saw your story and here im ,it was hard and difficult to imagine them together...but with your words convicted a litle bit...
I enjoyed your story and im glad that red it...touched my heart...
Take care
Carla Cascão
Dear Aofie,I must confess that i see severus and harry like father and son...i imagine more harry with draco and severus with hermione...
i usually dont read severus and harry but i saw your story and here im ,it was hard and difficult to imagine them together...but with your words convicted a litle bit...
I enjoyed your story and im glad that red it...touched my heart...
Take care
Carla Cascão
6/6/2013 c21 goddessofthenightandlunar
This was such a great story it was very different and for that all the thumbs up. It had a great ending but I want more
This was such a great story it was very different and for that all the thumbs up. It had a great ending but I want more
5/5/2013 c21 2ReillyScarecrowRocks
this was really nice, I enjoy snarry fics where they are quite mature about their feelings
I also appreciate that you didn't turn Harry's minor breakdown into something major; he's a basically strong person so a major mental breakdown just wouldn't fit with Harry's character
thanks for the good read
: )
2ReillyScarecrowRocksthis was really nice, I enjoy snarry fics where they are quite mature about their feelings
I also appreciate that you didn't turn Harry's minor breakdown into something major; he's a basically strong person so a major mental breakdown just wouldn't fit with Harry's character
thanks for the good read
: )
4/26/2013 c21 1ashrk95
I loved this story! It was really sweet! I especially liked the transition from respected person into lover in the beginning before they broke up!
1ashrk95I loved this story! It was really sweet! I especially liked the transition from respected person into lover in the beginning before they broke up!
4/14/2013 c21 Bootsrcool
Amazing! I live this so much! Imma be bookmarking this just to let you know.
:D
Amazing! I live this so much! Imma be bookmarking this just to let you know.
:D
4/8/2013 c21 Ristikkain
AWWW! Definitely one of the best stories I've ever read! A nice, normal story! The romance progressed so well! Maybe a bit hastily, and the scene in which Severus and Harry made up could have been a bit longer, but you're forgive, the story as a whole more than made up for it
Your way of writing is really nice. It's so natural, and the story just rolls on naturally (DUH). And the fact, that you haven't before this story written smut wasn't really noticeable at all. It's actually very refreshing to read a story in which there are not sex scenes in every chapter. The fact that you did not write, for example, their first time actually made the sroty all the better! Gave me a chance to focus on the plot for once.. ;)
Good jog, and thank you for writing, and finishing, AND giving the rest of us the opportunity to read your wonderfull creation! Keep on going!
AWWW! Definitely one of the best stories I've ever read! A nice, normal story! The romance progressed so well! Maybe a bit hastily, and the scene in which Severus and Harry made up could have been a bit longer, but you're forgive, the story as a whole more than made up for it
Your way of writing is really nice. It's so natural, and the story just rolls on naturally (DUH). And the fact, that you haven't before this story written smut wasn't really noticeable at all. It's actually very refreshing to read a story in which there are not sex scenes in every chapter. The fact that you did not write, for example, their first time actually made the sroty all the better! Gave me a chance to focus on the plot for once.. ;)
Good jog, and thank you for writing, and finishing, AND giving the rest of us the opportunity to read your wonderfull creation! Keep on going!