for Nobody's Home2/11/2011 c1 
7Zewy
okay, this was really sad but sweet. I loved the start of the story, but at the end ewith rouge and remy I felt - hm - kinda lame. It went to fast, and didn't rogue want to leave to save the one she loved? Why would she let remy come with her then - I mean - didn't she want to get away to not hurt anyone of them? Confusing, she could at least had tried to push him away a little more.
The ending felt stressed. You had a good start, but it didn't end with an bang. Nice idea thoguth, you just didn't quite get there.
Maybe working a little bit harder on the ending next time, other then that a wonderful cute angsty story! Good work!
7Zewyokay, this was really sad but sweet. I loved the start of the story, but at the end ewith rouge and remy I felt - hm - kinda lame. It went to fast, and didn't rogue want to leave to save the one she loved? Why would she let remy come with her then - I mean - didn't she want to get away to not hurt anyone of them? Confusing, she could at least had tried to push him away a little more.
The ending felt stressed. You had a good start, but it didn't end with an bang. Nice idea thoguth, you just didn't quite get there.
Maybe working a little bit harder on the ending next time, other then that a wonderful cute angsty story! Good work!
2/10/2011 c1 5Bluejayz35
Interesting idea, but the spelling and grammar could use some work. For example, it's spelled New Orleans, not New Orland's. Other than those mistakes, its an enjoyable story. :)
5Bluejayz35Interesting idea, but the spelling and grammar could use some work. For example, it's spelled New Orleans, not New Orland's. Other than those mistakes, its an enjoyable story. :)