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3MarionGrace
Aw loved the ending.
"Yeah, we're greasers, but they don't party every single night. Well Buck, does. But that's beside the point.
The point is, I'm happy."
That's beautiful! Plus the Buck part being funny!
3MarionGraceAw loved the ending.
"Yeah, we're greasers, but they don't party every single night. Well Buck, does. But that's beside the point.
The point is, I'm happy."
That's beautiful! Plus the Buck part being funny!
1/14/2012 c4 Jackie
Good start but a really lame ending imo. Andy is kind of a mary-sue and Johnny was totally out of character in the last 2 chapters ,like you lost interest or something so i suggest you remove this. Theres enough mary-sues already existing on this fandom to put me off reading it forever!
Good start but a really lame ending imo. Andy is kind of a mary-sue and Johnny was totally out of character in the last 2 chapters ,like you lost interest or something so i suggest you remove this. Theres enough mary-sues already existing on this fandom to put me off reading it forever!
1/9/2012 c4 14writer3098
horrible ending way too rushed and too perfect andy is such a mary sue it makes me wanna puke
14writer3098horrible ending way too rushed and too perfect andy is such a mary sue it makes me wanna puke
1/9/2012 c3 writer3098
should have ended it here because i see its another chapter it would've been better as a one shot because as you continued it grew more ooc and unrealistic for that time period and they didn't talk like that go reread the book
should have ended it here because i see its another chapter it would've been better as a one shot because as you continued it grew more ooc and unrealistic for that time period and they didn't talk like that go reread the book
1/9/2012 c1 writer3098
Is Andy a girl because if so it's a bit mary sue because girls didn't have guys names back then
Is Andy a girl because if so it's a bit mary sue because girls didn't have guys names back then
7/4/2011 c4 Hayden
Wow! I dont know what made me do it or why but, i decided to read this story again (maybe i just missed a little johnnyxandy love hee hee :D) but boy, did it feel great! I totally forgot how much i loved this story! How much i love and adore andy, how cory made me laugh a little and of course, how sweet, innocent, sensitive and absolutely adorable johnny is. :) He was in such character throughout the entire story it was AWESOME! His use of sylvia to fill in the void, the lost hope, that andy would never love him the same way that he did for her sounded so much like him! Just like his sweet, though broken soul that i just HAD to go "awwwwwwwwww!" Im so glad that you decided to write this story. Its amazing! :)
Wow! I dont know what made me do it or why but, i decided to read this story again (maybe i just missed a little johnnyxandy love hee hee :D) but boy, did it feel great! I totally forgot how much i loved this story! How much i love and adore andy, how cory made me laugh a little and of course, how sweet, innocent, sensitive and absolutely adorable johnny is. :) He was in such character throughout the entire story it was AWESOME! His use of sylvia to fill in the void, the lost hope, that andy would never love him the same way that he did for her sounded so much like him! Just like his sweet, though broken soul that i just HAD to go "awwwwwwwwww!" Im so glad that you decided to write this story. Its amazing! :)
6/20/2011 c4 TwilightSodapop54fangirl
This is a really cute story. However, it looks to me like you started losing interest in it in the last 2 chaps. The ending feels very...random somehow. Not forced just, unfocused a little, which is sad because this really is a nice story. I am sorry to say though that if you are really losing interest and really do despise your OUTSIDERS fics (i take it there were more than this one) then maybe you should remove this fic. It started out well but had a very unfocused ending. It was nice though. Thats just my opinion.
This is a really cute story. However, it looks to me like you started losing interest in it in the last 2 chaps. The ending feels very...random somehow. Not forced just, unfocused a little, which is sad because this really is a nice story. I am sorry to say though that if you are really losing interest and really do despise your OUTSIDERS fics (i take it there were more than this one) then maybe you should remove this fic. It started out well but had a very unfocused ending. It was nice though. Thats just my opinion.
5/10/2011 c1 Bluestarburst
Zomg I LOVE your story ! I am reading this book in my English class and we are only reading it ONE chapter at a time, ugh it sucks cuz the suspence is killing me. I like this Story because not only does it have a HAPPY ending, JOHNNY [~I lv u !] is in it and he lives AND he has a girl friend! Good job I do hope you do make more storeiez ^ ~ ^
Zomg I LOVE your story ! I am reading this book in my English class and we are only reading it ONE chapter at a time, ugh it sucks cuz the suspence is killing me. I like this Story because not only does it have a HAPPY ending, JOHNNY [~I lv u !] is in it and he lives AND he has a girl friend! Good job I do hope you do make more storeiez ^ ~ ^
5/5/2011 c4 Hayden
AW! Sad to see it end, but you couldnt have ended it any better way. :) It was just so cute and... Complete. Im really glad you shared this fic with us readers. It was nice. Thanks. Enjoyed reading it. Bye! :)
AW! Sad to see it end, but you couldnt have ended it any better way. :) It was just so cute and... Complete. Im really glad you shared this fic with us readers. It was nice. Thanks. Enjoyed reading it. Bye! :)
5/3/2011 c3 Hayden
65 DAYS? UP-DATE!
65 DAYS? UP-DATE!
4/23/2011 c3 Hayden
P.S. I think its really cool and awesome and nice of you to upload links of pics to your OC's. (I know i absolutely LOVE amandas hilary duff inspired pic. I dont know where you got the inspiration from but, it TOTALLY WORKS!:)) I think it makes it easier for us readers/reviewers to visualize and know what the OC's look like-esspecially with what the writer visualizes. Its good to know what the writer sees and imagines and uploading your OC link pics really helps so... Thanks! :)
P.S. I think its really cool and awesome and nice of you to upload links of pics to your OC's. (I know i absolutely LOVE amandas hilary duff inspired pic. I dont know where you got the inspiration from but, it TOTALLY WORKS!:)) I think it makes it easier for us readers/reviewers to visualize and know what the OC's look like-esspecially with what the writer visualizes. Its good to know what the writer sees and imagines and uploading your OC link pics really helps so... Thanks! :)
4/23/2011 c3 Hayden
Okay whats happening here? You've gone COMPLETELY AWOL on this story. Its been, like, TWO MONTHS since your last update! Please tell me you didnt forget about this story or abandoned it? Its really awesome. And nice. And funny LOL.:) Even if you end it with one last chapter, please update. Its really cool! I really like this story so please UPDATE! I cant say it enough: UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE XD I love johnny and andy together! :)
Okay whats happening here? You've gone COMPLETELY AWOL on this story. Its been, like, TWO MONTHS since your last update! Please tell me you didnt forget about this story or abandoned it? Its really awesome. And nice. And funny LOL.:) Even if you end it with one last chapter, please update. Its really cool! I really like this story so please UPDATE! I cant say it enough: UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE XD I love johnny and andy together! :)