for HarryGinny Drabbles4/22/2014 c38 DeletedAccount3498
Omg hahaha! That's so adorable, and so in character considering Teddy's inheritance of Tonks ability to change their appearance. (I forgot what it's called :X)
The description surrounding the sky, and the bats were really good. I had a very vivid mental image once again, and my favourite line of description was:
[the silhouettes dancing across the blank canvas in front of them.]
Omg hahaha! That's so adorable, and so in character considering Teddy's inheritance of Tonks ability to change their appearance. (I forgot what it's called :X)
The description surrounding the sky, and the bats were really good. I had a very vivid mental image once again, and my favourite line of description was:
[the silhouettes dancing across the blank canvas in front of them.]
4/22/2014 c37 DeletedAccount3498
Aw! That is literally the only thing I could utter after reading this! This chapter was very sweet, and threaded the building's past with the present very well. The description was very good, especially considering you had a 100 word maximum and only one or two lines to do the description with, but I could imagine it entirely in my head. A suggestion would be to include the flashback scene of Godric's Hollow on the night Harry's parents got murdered (but only the description surrounding the streets and Halloween, we don't need to read the sad ending again :( ) in the author's notes or something, just like what you did with Fresh Pickled Toad so readers can enjoy the similarities and differences between the two.
Aw! That is literally the only thing I could utter after reading this! This chapter was very sweet, and threaded the building's past with the present very well. The description was very good, especially considering you had a 100 word maximum and only one or two lines to do the description with, but I could imagine it entirely in my head. A suggestion would be to include the flashback scene of Godric's Hollow on the night Harry's parents got murdered (but only the description surrounding the streets and Halloween, we don't need to read the sad ending again :( ) in the author's notes or something, just like what you did with Fresh Pickled Toad so readers can enjoy the similarities and differences between the two.
4/22/2014 c35 DeletedAccount3498
Wow, I really liked this. It had a sort of nostalgic feel to it, you know? Which I think was created by the present past tense, and all the short one-sentence flashbacks depicting moments spent at the Burrow. My only question is - where's Harry and Ron? If Luna and Hermione were there, Harry and Ron would most likely be, I mean, I'm pretty sure they went back to finish their final year of Hogwarts with Hermione.
Also, the book title is 'Hogwarts: a History'. (Yes, that punctuation counts too) :PP
Wow, I really liked this. It had a sort of nostalgic feel to it, you know? Which I think was created by the present past tense, and all the short one-sentence flashbacks depicting moments spent at the Burrow. My only question is - where's Harry and Ron? If Luna and Hermione were there, Harry and Ron would most likely be, I mean, I'm pretty sure they went back to finish their final year of Hogwarts with Hermione.
Also, the book title is 'Hogwarts: a History'. (Yes, that punctuation counts too) :PP
4/22/2014 c34 DeletedAccount3498
Awwwww, this was so sweet! Like all of these chapters were! I could totally imagine this in my head, and the description was really good.
[Dishes of steaming hot food, candles lit and music drifting in from the living room radio] - They were all very effective and described a lovely image, and I really liked the last line. I can so imagine this from Harry's POV, and all that's running through his head as his doing all that.
Awwwww, this was so sweet! Like all of these chapters were! I could totally imagine this in my head, and the description was really good.
[Dishes of steaming hot food, candles lit and music drifting in from the living room radio] - They were all very effective and described a lovely image, and I really liked the last line. I can so imagine this from Harry's POV, and all that's running through his head as his doing all that.
4/22/2014 c33 DeletedAccount3498
Wow I really liked this. It's so fitting and bittersweet, and the only problem with this chapter was that it wasn't long-enough. I wish there was more.
Wow I really liked this. It's so fitting and bittersweet, and the only problem with this chapter was that it wasn't long-enough. I wish there was more.
4/22/2014 c32 DeletedAccount3498
Nice chapter. I think you emerged the future non-canon feel perfectly with the nostalgic war atmosphere in this chapter, and it really showed how much Harry and Ginny understood each other. Can I suggest a chapter where the theme is Possessed, and the drabble would relate to Harry and Ginny's experiences being possessed/having a telepathic link to Voldemort, and their mutual understanding that would've arisen from that?
Aww, the last line was so sweet 33
Nice chapter. I think you emerged the future non-canon feel perfectly with the nostalgic war atmosphere in this chapter, and it really showed how much Harry and Ginny understood each other. Can I suggest a chapter where the theme is Possessed, and the drabble would relate to Harry and Ginny's experiences being possessed/having a telepathic link to Voldemort, and their mutual understanding that would've arisen from that?
Aww, the last line was so sweet 33
4/22/2014 c31 DeletedAccount3498
Aww, this was a really good chapter!
I loved Ron's analysis of Harry through his point of view, which we know would be somewhat bias since Ginny's his sister, and the fact that he approves of Harry says enough about him as a boyfriend.
I loved the last line, and think it's perfectly in character for Ron to think that (assuming this is set from the fifth book onwards because he was immature before that), and I thought all the characters were in character. Though I was wondering what time frame this occurred? I'm going to guess it's after DH because Harry stopped having a relationship with Ginny before that, because he didn't want Voldemort to target her, and in the brief time towards the end of fifth year where they did hang out, they kept it secret. So I'm going to guess it's in the year after where Harry, Ron and Hermione come back to finish their last year at school. Am I right?
Aww, this was a really good chapter!
I loved Ron's analysis of Harry through his point of view, which we know would be somewhat bias since Ginny's his sister, and the fact that he approves of Harry says enough about him as a boyfriend.
I loved the last line, and think it's perfectly in character for Ron to think that (assuming this is set from the fifth book onwards because he was immature before that), and I thought all the characters were in character. Though I was wondering what time frame this occurred? I'm going to guess it's after DH because Harry stopped having a relationship with Ginny before that, because he didn't want Voldemort to target her, and in the brief time towards the end of fifth year where they did hang out, they kept it secret. So I'm going to guess it's in the year after where Harry, Ron and Hermione come back to finish their last year at school. Am I right?
4/22/2014 c30 DeletedAccount3498
Oh they had their wedding in autumn? That's cool, and I love the descriptions of Ginny's hair, autumn and the flashback to why Harry liked autumn since eleven. It was beautifully written.
Oh they had their wedding in autumn? That's cool, and I love the descriptions of Ginny's hair, autumn and the flashback to why Harry liked autumn since eleven. It was beautifully written.
4/22/2014 c29 DeletedAccount3498
Trololol, it's funny but I wonder why Ginny let Harry go drinking without him...?
I think 'She chuckled...' should be on a different line, same goes for 'He wobbled again. "OK, maybe...' and there should be a comma in place of the full stop at 'are infinite." He quoted," and the 'he' should be in all lower case. Same goes for the 'again. "OK, maybe...'.
Trololol, it's funny but I wonder why Ginny let Harry go drinking without him...?
I think 'She chuckled...' should be on a different line, same goes for 'He wobbled again. "OK, maybe...' and there should be a comma in place of the full stop at 'are infinite." He quoted," and the 'he' should be in all lower case. Same goes for the 'again. "OK, maybe...'.
4/22/2014 c28 DeletedAccount3498
Haha, I think I get what that was implying. Another well written, enjoyable chapter :)
Can you do a songfic drabble next time if you're still updating?
Haha, I think I get what that was implying. Another well written, enjoyable chapter :)
Can you do a songfic drabble next time if you're still updating?
4/22/2014 c26 DeletedAccount3498
Lol, this was humorous. I can easily imagine it happening in families, and the only problem with this chapter is that 'Flooed' shouldn't be capitalized.
Lol, this was humorous. I can easily imagine it happening in families, and the only problem with this chapter is that 'Flooed' shouldn't be capitalized.
4/22/2014 c25 DeletedAccount3498
Haha, thanks for posting that there. It was like nice treat to accompany this chapter. J.K Rowling is a genius to think of that poem!
I really liked this chapter, and the moment I saw the line 'Ron's eyes twinkled' and the chapter title, I immediately knew somehow, Ginny's embarrassing display of affection was going to be brought up XD
Haha, thanks for posting that there. It was like nice treat to accompany this chapter. J.K Rowling is a genius to think of that poem!
I really liked this chapter, and the moment I saw the line 'Ron's eyes twinkled' and the chapter title, I immediately knew somehow, Ginny's embarrassing display of affection was going to be brought up XD
4/22/2014 c24 DeletedAccount3498
Haha, that was sweet and short (well they all are), and I really liked Ginny's dialogue. It was smart and creative, and there were no SPaG corrections to be made in this chapter! Well done :)
I really liked the description of the scene, and the image it painted in my mind. I think this is an awesome chapter! And one suggestion for a future chapter could be - pranks. I'd love to see some sort of drabble on that! :P
Haha, that was sweet and short (well they all are), and I really liked Ginny's dialogue. It was smart and creative, and there were no SPaG corrections to be made in this chapter! Well done :)
I really liked the description of the scene, and the image it painted in my mind. I think this is an awesome chapter! And one suggestion for a future chapter could be - pranks. I'd love to see some sort of drabble on that! :P