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3/13/2012 c1 Cheeky Monkey
Amazing, amazing, amazing! I absolutely LOVE this story and your AWESOME writing style! LOVE the oc Nao (was it?) She's a perfect mix of lazy Shikamaru and still ninja awesomeness (her skill in espionage :D) AND she has her own nin pet? FREAKIN AWESOME! XD Hurry, hurry with chapter four pleeeeeeease! XO
8/2/2011 c2 4NyxNightmare
I AM HERE TO PEER-PRESSURE YOU INTO WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER. PRESSURE. DO YOU FEEL THIS PRESSURE. COMING FROM YOUR PEER. IS IT NOT OVERWHELMING?

In all seriousness, I like it so far. Your writing style is very enjoyable and flows nicely. I also really like your OC, even though I don't know much about her yet.

Now, I notice you haven't updated since May... which is a problem. Which brings back my PEEEEER PRESSURE!

I look forward to the next chapter... which I'm sure will appear due to the ridiculous of e-peer pressure I am e-sending you through this e-review.

~Nyx
6/19/2011 c2 vanessa6421gmail.com
this is really good :D. if you need brainstorming ideas for this,id be glad to help.and hurry up with the next chapter! :p
6/1/2011 c2 4baibabs
You sound like you have medical knowledge, which as your best friend I know you have none. I want more, just so you know. :D
6/1/2011 c2 1mezwantzvgs
Yay u updated!
2/13/2011 c1 mezwantzvgs
I wanna see more of the story! Please continue!
2/13/2011 c1 4ZombieToaster
I'm normally not the type of person to read Naruto fanfiction. Somehow I came across this story, and I must say I quite enjoy it.Nao seems like a good OC, something I don't say often. I hope to see more from you. :D
2/13/2011 c1 1Your Favorite Freak
Great first chapter! Update soon :S
2/13/2011 c1 4baibabs
Finally after two years of hard work you finally manage to bring out your first chapter. You put so much thought into Nao, and I can't wait to see it all plaed out in a story. I hope to see another chapter to be put out soon. I as your Beta not only wish you the best of plot bunnies, but the skill that it takes to stay with a project so long. After seeing multiple awesome attempts at your first chapter this is most definatly my favorite.
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