for Lingering1/1/2012 c1 
89WeatherWatch
Wonderful.
The style is particularly lovely. It's very quiet, full of introspection, like keeping secrets always is - and, after all, that's what the four of them are doing at home in England.
Their sneezing at smells of 'future things' is perfect, and their closeness is nicely captured. The idea of Narnia lingering is just lovely. A little heartbreaking, but lovely nonetheless.
Into the favourites it goes.
89WeatherWatchWonderful.
The style is particularly lovely. It's very quiet, full of introspection, like keeping secrets always is - and, after all, that's what the four of them are doing at home in England.
Their sneezing at smells of 'future things' is perfect, and their closeness is nicely captured. The idea of Narnia lingering is just lovely. A little heartbreaking, but lovely nonetheless.
Into the favourites it goes.
10/9/2011 c1 Ira
hi i just read your story and it is beautiful
every time i read narnia the lion ect. i always think about what did they feel inside after words
lucy being treated as a kid even though she experienced of being so much more through time
thank you! for the feelings i had after reading the book were brought to be in a computer screen version
thank you and it is beautiful
my email(if you think its ok to answer)
hi i just read your story and it is beautiful
every time i read narnia the lion ect. i always think about what did they feel inside after words
lucy being treated as a kid even though she experienced of being so much more through time
thank you! for the feelings i had after reading the book were brought to be in a computer screen version
thank you and it is beautiful
my email(if you think its ok to answer)
5/16/2011 c1 1JadelynNB13
This is really good. It's kind of funny how so many people think of the books and movies as being innocent. The reality of it is much harsher like you portrayed. If something like this really occured the only way the Pevensie's would be normal is if they forgot most of what happened. Personally I think Lucy is the worst of. If this really happened it would be terrible to experience adult desires and rule as a queen only to revert to a child who should have no knowledge of such things or manners. It's cruel to make them forget, but much crueler to let them remember.
1JadelynNB13This is really good. It's kind of funny how so many people think of the books and movies as being innocent. The reality of it is much harsher like you portrayed. If something like this really occured the only way the Pevensie's would be normal is if they forgot most of what happened. Personally I think Lucy is the worst of. If this really happened it would be terrible to experience adult desires and rule as a queen only to revert to a child who should have no knowledge of such things or manners. It's cruel to make them forget, but much crueler to let them remember.
5/15/2011 c1 Guest
I have no idea why this hasn't already gotten dozens of reviews! It's AMAZING, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise!
I have no idea why this hasn't already gotten dozens of reviews! It's AMAZING, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise!