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4/13 c19 5The Real Iggy
10/26/2019 c19 1ThatG3Obsessive
I know it's been a while, but I found this fic through your RTTP podcast and I hecking love it! I don't have especially high hopes for a continuation, but even if it never gets finished I had one hell of a good time reading it! I look forward to daydreaming how this might have ended whenever I'm bored 333
6/17/2019 c9 4Ai Adler
Okay, so it does take place during the first episode... I guess the return to the past didn't work, but that still doesn't explain how William knows about Kadic and the gang, or what happened to Yumi...
6/17/2019 c8 Ai Adler
Who the hell is this "sweetheart" man, when the hell did he meet Sissi before and what does he want? Why is he comparing her to Molly Malone? Knowing her story, I hope this isn't some sort of foreshadowing...
Milly freaked me out. What. Was. That!?
And what is it with William? What is going on with those drawings? I can't wait to find out!
6/14/2019 c7 Ai Adler
I forgot to mention how much Yumi freaked me out in the last chapter. I seriously wonder what's going on with her and whatever this "I'll keep that in mind, Yumi" is. Is William communicating with Yumi? And if so, how and/or why? How does Yumi even know William in this universe? Does it have something to do with the return to the past? I have so many questions and I need the answers now!
Also, it seems like Matt slowkey ships Sissi and William. And I can't blame him.
6/14/2019 c6 Ai Adler
And oh God, this chapter was soooo good, I loved the toasting moment (especially the moment with "Uncle Louis"... that was quite sweet, but poor Matt) and Sissi growing closer to the kids. And it seems like William is stalking Sissi! I wonder how he'll fit in to their little group dynamic.
6/14/2019 c5 Ai Adler
"Anete Olivia Harp". Is that Sissi's mother? And I wonder, if Mr. Delmas knew and remembers Franz Hopper quite well, did he know Aelita back then? He hasn't bothered to look her up and neither he nor Sissi have mentioned her before. In fact, it doesn't seem like they even know who she is. Maybe the dance that Sissi mentioned was the one in the first episode, and Aelita is still trapped in the computer. And that is why Odd and Jeremie were talking about it in the prologue...!
Speaking of them, I hope they are alright. Seeing how "unknown" is apparently synonymous with "dead", and how Mr. Delmas hasn't even bothered to look Ulrich up gives me a bad feeling...
And what did Matthieu mean by not knowing his friends' real names? Who doesn't know them?
I can't believe I'm actually liking Sissi in this story. It's just proof of your great writing and fantastic character development!
6/14/2019 c4 Ai Adler
Okay, I'm actually starting to like Mr Delmas quite a lot. He seems like a well-rounded character. And the redhead was Milly, maybe? And Union Jack... William? And it seems like XANA did transport some of her monsters to the real world, according to what those boys were talking about. I wonder how that happened.
6/14/2019 c3 Ai Adler
I just can't wrap my head around what could have possibly happened to Yumi and how Sissi is involved. But at least we know that some students survived whatever happened, so at least there's hope there. And that dream Sissi had at the beginning? What was that? And I cannot even be mad at her for being angry that no one told her about the showers, I would go crazy if that happened to me after not being able to shower for a while...
6/14/2019 c2 Ai Adler
I forgot to login to write my previous comment, my bad.

But OH MY GOD, what happened to Yumi? And what happened in general that was so terrible? Did XANA unleash some sort of invasion or control every machine in France?
6/14/2019 c1 Guest
So... what the hell happened? Is this an apocalypse sort of situation? And how could XANA be involved? And where is the gang? This seems like the start of a promising story and I can't wait to read more!
1/10/2019 c19 1Miss Seraphina
Woww! It's awesome. I really like your story.
I really hope you continue this story; it's so far one of the better stories I've read on the fandom. I hope you can find whatever inspiration you're seeking for the last arc. Anyways, good luck with your story.
5/19/2018 c3 61AwesomeFanFictionAuthor
aw, come on guys, dont be scared of yumi
3/22/2018 c1 16The Real Snickie
Hello, tis Snickie. I read this a few years ago and now I'm reading it again after just going through stuff in my favorites list and I am SO HAPPY you are continuing this. I'd forgotten just how amazing it was and now I'm sitting here spazzing because THINGS ARE HAPPENING and I have so many theories and I'm like "okay shut up Snickie so you can read the next arc" and AAAAAAAA. (One of these days I will write a coherent review with actual critique and stuff lol.)
12/4/2017 c2 61AwesomeFanFictionAuthor
You have a really good take on how language barriers could come into play without being repetative or Seward. Never was able to figure that one out myself. Also how people would act in a group, as opposed to individuals lone wolfing it.

I knew it was going to be yumi from the moment a new person was coming...possibly cause I accidentally saw the title of the next chapter. whoops, but dang...what happened to her...what happened to paris?
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