
2/16/2011 c1
33Air-Quiet-Reader
Intriguing concept that I'd never considered. You make it flow and work quite well. Would have liked some more of Flynn's wit and humor, but he is fairly in character (from more of a Eugene perspective, anyway).
Good stuff.

Intriguing concept that I'd never considered. You make it flow and work quite well. Would have liked some more of Flynn's wit and humor, but he is fairly in character (from more of a Eugene perspective, anyway).
Good stuff.
2/15/2011 c1
1Aftershockxx
Ahahahah!
Flying Pan 1
Charming Rogue 0
I am very interested, please continue!

Ahahahah!
Flying Pan 1
Charming Rogue 0
I am very interested, please continue!
2/15/2011 c1
16boundtotomorrow
INSTANT LOVE. I wonder how no-one's thought of this before? I guess because the first reprise isn't the movie but still: this is pretty darn clever and witty of you to do! I'm impressed and excited for your next chapter! :)

INSTANT LOVE. I wonder how no-one's thought of this before? I guess because the first reprise isn't the movie but still: this is pretty darn clever and witty of you to do! I'm impressed and excited for your next chapter! :)
2/14/2011 c1
26comealongpond
I love this. I like how you incorporated the first reprise, since it wasn't in the movie. It actually is a really sad song, come to think of it...
Good story. It felt...fairytale-ish. Which is always nice.

I love this. I like how you incorporated the first reprise, since it wasn't in the movie. It actually is a really sad song, come to think of it...
Good story. It felt...fairytale-ish. Which is always nice.
2/14/2011 c1 Brittany
Hi! So I'm the person who made that Tangled edit which you based this fic on, and can I just say WOW. This was very well written! Thank you so much for writing this and just sdhfksjdhgkjfd I love you, lol. 3 Keep up the good work! :D
Hi! So I'm the person who made that Tangled edit which you based this fic on, and can I just say WOW. This was very well written! Thank you so much for writing this and just sdhfksjdhgkjfd I love you, lol. 3 Keep up the good work! :D
2/14/2011 c1 AIOFanNCRM
Oh, hey, it's you! HI!
An interesting way to incorporate the real fairytale into the Disney one - in the real one, the Prince sees the witch leave, and come at one point, and yell 'Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair' - of course, this wasn't perfect, but it ties up nicely with the movie. :P A different alternative that I liked! :)
Wonderful job! You should definitely write more!
Oh Maximus...
And he caught her singing! Nice catch there! :D and the frying pan!
I really really liked this!
Oh, hey, it's you! HI!
An interesting way to incorporate the real fairytale into the Disney one - in the real one, the Prince sees the witch leave, and come at one point, and yell 'Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair' - of course, this wasn't perfect, but it ties up nicely with the movie. :P A different alternative that I liked! :)
Wonderful job! You should definitely write more!
Oh Maximus...
And he caught her singing! Nice catch there! :D and the frying pan!
I really really liked this!