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11/18/2014 c1 liane
awwww that was adorable 3
2/16/2011 c1 8JakunenNeesan
That was such a cute story! Good luck with the contest! :)
2/16/2011 c1 59Angel Peach Blossom
This was an interesting story! However, there are some things bothering me a bit.

This is just me, but I think Gray was a bit OOC here. Not as a whole or anything like that. Just a little. I don't think that Gray would be that forgetful. I'm sure he would have remembered if he said yes to Mary to go to the Goddess Festival with her.

I would have liked a little more description in places, but for the most part it got what you wanted across. Except, in my opinion, when you did that flashback. I got kinda confused since you don't go into detail on what happened there.

Finally, that last bit with Claire seemed a little abrupt to me. I'm not sure why, but it just bothers me.

Still, I do like the idea for this story though. Good luck in the contest!
2/15/2011 c1 KeepCalmandReview
ann is awesome as always. nice story btw! this is how i would potray gray, honestly. he's dense, grumpy, but he comes to your farm on your first days anyway (in the game)
2/15/2011 c1 8StellaAllets
aww that was sweet, i'm liking the ending :3

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