2/15/2011 c1 Kyuketsuki In Oki
You're writing another football-themed fic? You really miss it already, don't you? LOL

Wait. This is marked complete? But . . . he's gotta go find her and sh*t! It certainly didn't "feel done".

-Q

2/15/2011 c1 Ivygirl702
Gah. This was super fun.

Love love love a feisty Bella and a cocky Edward. And I especially adore that she gave him the number to the music store.

Favorite line: "You could still have a cock hidden in there somewhere."

Thanks for this! And good luck on the contest.

2/15/2011 c1 12TwilightMomofTwo
cute...but Edward's a douche...and wait, it's complete? Nuh-uh, girlfriend. Seems to me like there's lots more story to tell...say you'll continue.

2/15/2011 c1 13WritingFicariously
You already know my initial thoughts on this. Seriously, Edward is SUCH a cocky bastard in this fic and I know I should hate him just on THAT characteristic but I have to admit... It's kind of hot. I'm sure I only think it's sexy because I don't have to deal with him in real life.

I love that Bella's a little sassy spitfire yet it's not over the top and completely unbelievable. It's more that she seems to have been pushed to her limit when it comes to jerky jocks. Hehe.

That locker scene was hot. I have a special place in my heart for F&T's locker scene but this one's crazy wicked. I love-love-loved the undressing scene. Edward egging Bella on and Bella responding by just taking off her clothes like it's not a big deal at all... Priceless! And that sex. Um. Whoa.

How does a girl find a hot scene like this to actually live?