for Magic Man4/2/2011 c1 
9EmoBlackie
Lol. i had to watch this movie in art class...im sorry the guy in tights creeped me out bcus there was always a bulge. Anywho, my messaging sucks and if u know how to send messages on a phone without that darn human ccode that will help. As for an idea, i was hoping you`d do a sequal for your story "Maybe" or try a new DxE story where Valerie, sam, paulina and ember try to win danny over...and possibly add catfights. lol. or have pariah dark or the ghost king kidknapp ember while her and danny ar dating.
9EmoBlackieLol. i had to watch this movie in art class...im sorry the guy in tights creeped me out bcus there was always a bulge. Anywho, my messaging sucks and if u know how to send messages on a phone without that darn human ccode that will help. As for an idea, i was hoping you`d do a sequal for your story "Maybe" or try a new DxE story where Valerie, sam, paulina and ember try to win danny over...and possibly add catfights. lol. or have pariah dark or the ghost king kidknapp ember while her and danny ar dating.
2/16/2011 c1 anonymousM
Screw the Bog. I got Jareth!
The main issue I have with this story is that it's not really a story; it's just song lyrics with little blurbs of Sarah's thoughts in it. The actual "story" part is way less than the song lyrics, and it should be the other way around.
This isn't a flame. This is constructive criticism.
Screw the Bog. I got Jareth!
The main issue I have with this story is that it's not really a story; it's just song lyrics with little blurbs of Sarah's thoughts in it. The actual "story" part is way less than the song lyrics, and it should be the other way around.
This isn't a flame. This is constructive criticism.