
2/17/2011 c1
7VampiresHaveLaws
I'm already in love with this. Sunday can't come soon enough. I laughed so hard at this part:
"You're such a fucker," I tell him, narrowing my eyes.
He grins, wide and proud. "I am. I really, really am." He pauses before gleefully adding, "You also told me he had a huge penis."
The connection between all of them is so light and playful. And the banter makes me smile.
I seriously can't wait for the next chapter. :)

I'm already in love with this. Sunday can't come soon enough. I laughed so hard at this part:
"You're such a fucker," I tell him, narrowing my eyes.
He grins, wide and proud. "I am. I really, really am." He pauses before gleefully adding, "You also told me he had a huge penis."
The connection between all of them is so light and playful. And the banter makes me smile.
I seriously can't wait for the next chapter. :)
2/17/2011 c1
1Violhaine
So in need of fluff. Funny, sexy, well written fluff. This is exactly it. So very happy. Sunday you say? OK. Will be here.
Violhaine

So in need of fluff. Funny, sexy, well written fluff. This is exactly it. So very happy. Sunday you say? OK. Will be here.
Violhaine
2/17/2011 c1 IHeartTwi
Cute. I had a smile plastered the entire time reading...keep up the good work!
Cute. I had a smile plastered the entire time reading...keep up the good work!
2/17/2011 c1
4Halawia
this was really cute. i loved the banter between Edward and Bella... especially when he corrects her about the fourth time... and his big penis. i laughed legit hard. can't wait to read the rest of this :)

this was really cute. i loved the banter between Edward and Bella... especially when he corrects her about the fourth time... and his big penis. i laughed legit hard. can't wait to read the rest of this :)
2/17/2011 c1
23Alby Mangroves
conga conga con-GA! Loved this, it woke me up and gave me butterflies in my tummy, and that's a good, giddy way to be on a Friday morning. The flashback at the end was wonderful, and the banter (as always in your fics); flawless and hilarious x *hearts*

conga conga con-GA! Loved this, it woke me up and gave me butterflies in my tummy, and that's a good, giddy way to be on a Friday morning. The flashback at the end was wonderful, and the banter (as always in your fics); flawless and hilarious x *hearts*
2/17/2011 c1
1americnxidiot
i mean, if your beta was ME and it was ME who had learned that it was ME who your story was dedicated to, i'd be going like this:
*dance dance dance*

i mean, if your beta was ME and it was ME who had learned that it was ME who your story was dedicated to, i'd be going like this:
*dance dance dance*