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8/15/2012 c7 2metsfan101
i loved reading this, great job :) d
4/17/2011 c6 Guest
Good reason for Ryuken to hate being a Quincy. Could add more dialogue and get into the characters head more. It would add a better chance for the Reader to feel like being there. Ja ne.
4/13/2011 c5 Guest
Good, but when you had the hollows attack it's if it suddenly happened and not enough detail for the fight. German right, at the end translation you were redundant telling the translation after it was already given. Like it can't wait for next chapter. Ja ne.
3/6/2011 c3 10gandalf42
ah interesting chapter i like how you potrayed how Nomad started the Quincy- Shinigami war. chapters could be a little longer but your doing good keep it up
2/28/2011 c2 Siamra
Not bad I liked the fight rewrite in chapter one it showed they are closer to the same level. Its nice to know your willing to take suggestions and work them into your story.
2/24/2011 c1 Siamra
My only real problem is Victor being beat so easily they are the same rank so it shouldn't be so one sided besides that i'm fine with the story.
2/18/2011 c1 gandalf42
very good. love how you potrayed Nomad. looking forward to the next chapter
2/17/2011 c1 ZxZ Fic Hunter
Overly nice chap,but i prefer if you write wouod little less so it just he hear footstep,Mifune send few more slases etc,But that's only my opinion.

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