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1/8/2012 c1 3CuteKick
*^_^* So sweet and romantic! I loved this, great work!
4/19/2011 c1 Chochoify
AWww Sweet~
4/17/2011 c1 sakldfbdkln
Write more please!
3/22/2011 c1 18Juular
Very lovely little love story.

First off, your characterizations were very good. The only OOC I might call out would be using Rikku's astraphobia, and then Paine seems to soften - I wouldn't say too fast - too much at the end. I'm not saying she would remain stone cold, I just think you made her maybe a little TOO happy at the end. Which also brings me to say that the ending felt a little cliche. It wasn't bad, but, it could have been better.

As for your writing in general, it was very good. Descriptive, well formed, and with a nice flow. All-in-all, this was a very good story. So, please don't mistake my minor criticisms for insults, I really did enjoy reading this.
2/23/2011 c1 1SinnX
This fic is Epic!

I love Rikku and Paine =D
2/21/2011 c1 4silverice90
That was really cute, you did a great job. Will there be a sequel? :)
2/19/2011 c1 IchigoTenchi
Wow.. I loved every word of it really great job!

You descibed the feelings and thoughts of them very well and I don't think that their are that much OOC^^

I'm looking forward to read more stories from you about this couple^^

IchigoTenchi

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