for Mobile Suit Gundam: Deikun's Army3/29/2020 c9 Zexs
I wish you had continued this so few authors decide to write UC fiction and manage to capture the original personalities that made up the characters during the one year war; before they all became Jaded by the corruption that occurred during the Zeta years. At this point in time, there is still a glimmer of hope that had all but had been extinguished by the time you reach Unicorn and even then you have a sense that history would just continually repeat itself with a few bight lights managing to spot the self-destruction of humanity. What you have done is craft a potentially better future were the alliances that formed during Zeta could emerge early in a better situation against a visible opponent. Even if you never pick up this fic again a brief outline of how you planned to conclude it would be greatly appreciated.
I wish you had continued this so few authors decide to write UC fiction and manage to capture the original personalities that made up the characters during the one year war; before they all became Jaded by the corruption that occurred during the Zeta years. At this point in time, there is still a glimmer of hope that had all but had been extinguished by the time you reach Unicorn and even then you have a sense that history would just continually repeat itself with a few bight lights managing to spot the self-destruction of humanity. What you have done is craft a potentially better future were the alliances that formed during Zeta could emerge early in a better situation against a visible opponent. Even if you never pick up this fic again a brief outline of how you planned to conclude it would be greatly appreciated.
3/30/2019 c10 Guest
I jpe you update this one day
I jpe you update this one day
5/30/2016 c10 Zexs
Interesting story you do not often see decent UC gundam fics, I hope that you come back to this one day.
Interesting story you do not often see decent UC gundam fics, I hope that you come back to this one day.
5/4/2015 c10 
7Blue Bragon
This is pretty fun and it's nice to see someone writting some UC stuff. I do like how you are handing Sayla and Char, just having sit down for a moment and talk about their love life was hilarious as hell. Thanks for everything and I hope you update soon.
7Blue BragonThis is pretty fun and it's nice to see someone writting some UC stuff. I do like how you are handing Sayla and Char, just having sit down for a moment and talk about their love life was hilarious as hell. Thanks for everything and I hope you update soon.
6/2/2014 c10 AirMan123
I will say at least this much, this story makes sense and the OC characters fit in well enough.
And your grammar is excellent.
The only bad thing is that you lack the diligence to update.
That is all... Oh wait... Where is RX-78-3 Gundam?
I will say at least this much, this story makes sense and the OC characters fit in well enough.
And your grammar is excellent.
The only bad thing is that you lack the diligence to update.
That is all... Oh wait... Where is RX-78-3 Gundam?
2/8/2014 c10 3Sieben Nightwing
Is there more of this? This is really good compared to what I've seen out there. Not a lot of people are willing to venture out on something like this. You're doing a fine job, and I would love to see more.
3Sieben NightwingIs there more of this? This is really good compared to what I've seen out there. Not a lot of people are willing to venture out on something like this. You're doing a fine job, and I would love to see more.
9/4/2013 c10 100Zy99
Great story!
Just thought you should know: According to a Tomino-penned side-story, one of Gihren's admirals is rather less loyal than he thinks. A certain bearded gentleman who is currently on a safari of sorts is rather canny about the fact that he is loyal to Daikun. If he can actually trust in his daughter's maturity for a little bit, he can rely on her crush on a certain ace pilot to keep her loyal and send her on a mission to contact certain forces. Can you see Haman in a Gundam? (in case you were wondering, her "normal" machine at this time is a white Rick Dom fitted with a psycommu system and a bit carrier)
Also, "The Plot to Assassinate Gihren" is a good little story with virtually no fighting-just political intrigue as Gihren, Kycilia, and the civil government maneuver in the closing days before A Baoa Qu.
100Zy99Great story!
Just thought you should know: According to a Tomino-penned side-story, one of Gihren's admirals is rather less loyal than he thinks. A certain bearded gentleman who is currently on a safari of sorts is rather canny about the fact that he is loyal to Daikun. If he can actually trust in his daughter's maturity for a little bit, he can rely on her crush on a certain ace pilot to keep her loyal and send her on a mission to contact certain forces. Can you see Haman in a Gundam? (in case you were wondering, her "normal" machine at this time is a white Rick Dom fitted with a psycommu system and a bit carrier)
Also, "The Plot to Assassinate Gihren" is a good little story with virtually no fighting-just political intrigue as Gihren, Kycilia, and the civil government maneuver in the closing days before A Baoa Qu.
8/12/2013 c10 2Mattman324
Hmm. This could be interesting. A MP version of the Gelgoog, Amuro getting a better suit (and with the ALEX and G-3 out of reach, that's probably the best thing that could happen), and Char starting to spring into action, with the group getting backing from a lot of groups.
Also, Anaveil Gato may be approaching Char. Who else is an amazing pilot who was from Solomon? This could have interesting connotations (remember, in SRW Compact 1, Gato can be convinced to join just because he knows Char is on your side)
...so, are we going to see anything of the 8th MS Team here?
2Mattman324Hmm. This could be interesting. A MP version of the Gelgoog, Amuro getting a better suit (and with the ALEX and G-3 out of reach, that's probably the best thing that could happen), and Char starting to spring into action, with the group getting backing from a lot of groups.
Also, Anaveil Gato may be approaching Char. Who else is an amazing pilot who was from Solomon? This could have interesting connotations (remember, in SRW Compact 1, Gato can be convinced to join just because he knows Char is on your side)
...so, are we going to see anything of the 8th MS Team here?
7/18/2013 c10 4Fireminer
Finally an update! Hope to see Char and Amuro got upgraded mech in the future (A Kampher Beam Type for Char and a Second Model Gundam Alex for Amuro)!
4FireminerFinally an update! Hope to see Char and Amuro got upgraded mech in the future (A Kampher Beam Type for Char and a Second Model Gundam Alex for Amuro)!
7/17/2013 c10 Gaby
Great,Who are Gihren,s Top Subordinates and MS,s Aces on his side?
Who do you think will turn on him?
Great,Who are Gihren,s Top Subordinates and MS,s Aces on his side?
Who do you think will turn on him?
7/15/2013 c10 2Wing Zero 032
And now is time for Casval to get political allies, and also they're getting the attention of Zimmad corporation as well, it seems that the Hi-Zak and some other Titans, A.E.U.G. & AXIS Neo-Zeon models will come out as well, mobile suits will come out a lot earlier now.
That combat practice was definetly ackward as hell to all the White Base personel
2Wing Zero 032And now is time for Casval to get political allies, and also they're getting the attention of Zimmad corporation as well, it seems that the Hi-Zak and some other Titans, A.E.U.G. & AXIS Neo-Zeon models will come out as well, mobile suits will come out a lot earlier now.
That combat practice was definetly ackward as hell to all the White Base personel
6/24/2013 c9 4Fireminer
It's very hard to find a decent Gundam UC story, and even harder with this quality. Your word simply... captivated me. Hope that some day you will get back your inspiration!
4FireminerIt's very hard to find a decent Gundam UC story, and even harder with this quality. Your word simply... captivated me. Hope that some day you will get back your inspiration!
6/21/2013 c9 2Wing Zero 032
Wow, even if you call this chapter a draft or filled with plotholes, is very consistent and well made so those would be hardly noticed, this is such an exelent quality job!
I really liked how you played the whole infiltration on and how they had managed to get in contact with Anaheim Electronics, this and Zimmad corporation I am very sure that soon new improved mobile suits will come to this "Neo-Zeon" faction, specially if they pull early the Hi-Zak and create a Hi-Dom as well, or producing the Gyan to fight the Gelgoogs
Great job, I do hope to see the next update soon
2Wing Zero 032Wow, even if you call this chapter a draft or filled with plotholes, is very consistent and well made so those would be hardly noticed, this is such an exelent quality job!
I really liked how you played the whole infiltration on and how they had managed to get in contact with Anaheim Electronics, this and Zimmad corporation I am very sure that soon new improved mobile suits will come to this "Neo-Zeon" faction, specially if they pull early the Hi-Zak and create a Hi-Dom as well, or producing the Gyan to fight the Gelgoogs
Great job, I do hope to see the next update soon
2/17/2012 c8 8aslanbrooke
I love this story! So very well-written. I can't wait to see how the Feddies and the Zekes try to get along, especially Amuro, Char, Lalah, and Sayla! I guess Amuro and Sayla are a couple here? Hallelujah, we don't see enough of that! Please keep that going!
P.S.: I know you said you don't like side stories, but I really think that inserting Johnny Ridden, with his devotion to Lady Kycilia, would be appropriate. With Delaz in here, will Anavel Gato be making an appearance with Giren's forces?
Also...I like Zenna and Mineva, please don't let anything bad happen to them! M'Quve is interesting, but I definitely don't like him. And what's going to happen with Jenna, Gruder, and Ramcha (I'm not implying a love triangle here, I promise)? Please update!
8aslanbrookeI love this story! So very well-written. I can't wait to see how the Feddies and the Zekes try to get along, especially Amuro, Char, Lalah, and Sayla! I guess Amuro and Sayla are a couple here? Hallelujah, we don't see enough of that! Please keep that going!
P.S.: I know you said you don't like side stories, but I really think that inserting Johnny Ridden, with his devotion to Lady Kycilia, would be appropriate. With Delaz in here, will Anavel Gato be making an appearance with Giren's forces?
Also...I like Zenna and Mineva, please don't let anything bad happen to them! M'Quve is interesting, but I definitely don't like him. And what's going to happen with Jenna, Gruder, and Ramcha (I'm not implying a love triangle here, I promise)? Please update!
2/17/2012 c8 8Double-DecaKiva-DenBlades
nice story
somehow i have and image in my head where char's Zeong and amuro's RX 78-2 fighting back to back after i read this chapter :D
8Double-DecaKiva-DenBladesnice story
somehow i have and image in my head where char's Zeong and amuro's RX 78-2 fighting back to back after i read this chapter :D