for What in the DEVILLL is going on here!2/26/2011 c3 
80kirkr0se
'Taylor' is a name. 'Tailor' is one who makes clothes.
If it's a poem, format it properly.
~Mademise Morte
80kirkr0se'Taylor' is a name. 'Tailor' is one who makes clothes.
If it's a poem, format it properly.
~Mademise Morte
2/26/2011 c2 kirkr0se
The capitalizations are once more haphazard, the flow jerky (and not in a particularly good way) and there are are quite a few typos.
~Mademise Morte
The capitalizations are once more haphazard, the flow jerky (and not in a particularly good way) and there are are quite a few typos.
~Mademise Morte
2/26/2011 c1 kirkr0se
The tone is extremely informal, considering it is China's writing. Not the most in-character piece ever.
The random capitalizations are strange. Never use 'cos' when you're writing in the third-person-omniscient.
~Mademise Morte
The tone is extremely informal, considering it is China's writing. Not the most in-character piece ever.
The random capitalizations are strange. Never use 'cos' when you're writing in the third-person-omniscient.
~Mademise Morte
2/20/2011 c1 Onyx Sprita
:'( Poor China...
That was really really good, write more! xD Glad you're starting a new story :)
:'( Poor China...
That was really really good, write more! xD Glad you're starting a new story :)