for Resent4/20/2015 c12 LadyJovi
I know this says on hiatus but I hope you will be able to finish this in a way that will make you happy with it. I really like it so far so I am going to follow the story in the hopes you will have a breakthrough soon.
I know this says on hiatus but I hope you will be able to finish this in a way that will make you happy with it. I really like it so far so I am going to follow the story in the hopes you will have a breakthrough soon.
8/30/2012 c12 Twilight-series-junkie
Hi, firstly thank you for update. I'm slightly hooked on this story, largely because I'm hoping it's going to turn into a great story once it's finished. Will it ever get finished? I ask this because to be honest it is starting to read like it's loosing direction. Either that or you seriously enjoy leaving your readers in suspense. This wouldn't be a problem if the updates were frequent. Usually when stories take a long time to be written is because the writer is having writer's block.
Nonetheless, there are also a few things to wonder about this chapter and maybe the last one too. How come all this crap was happening to Tony? Where was Bella? What sort of mother does this make her if she is unaware that her son is somehow being abused/ bullied/ threaten whatever you want to call it.
I really hope you get to finish this story and hopefully soon. And I really really like Tony's perception of the wolves. They really are testosterone filled fools!
Hi, firstly thank you for update. I'm slightly hooked on this story, largely because I'm hoping it's going to turn into a great story once it's finished. Will it ever get finished? I ask this because to be honest it is starting to read like it's loosing direction. Either that or you seriously enjoy leaving your readers in suspense. This wouldn't be a problem if the updates were frequent. Usually when stories take a long time to be written is because the writer is having writer's block.
Nonetheless, there are also a few things to wonder about this chapter and maybe the last one too. How come all this crap was happening to Tony? Where was Bella? What sort of mother does this make her if she is unaware that her son is somehow being abused/ bullied/ threaten whatever you want to call it.
I really hope you get to finish this story and hopefully soon. And I really really like Tony's perception of the wolves. They really are testosterone filled fools!
8/26/2012 c9 MaryMary123
he is full of anger on how they have had to survive. This is normal for a boy to defend his mother and be against his father. Reni will want Edward and she will seek him out. She will forgive what she does not understand.
good story.
he is full of anger on how they have had to survive. This is normal for a boy to defend his mother and be against his father. Reni will want Edward and she will seek him out. She will forgive what she does not understand.
good story.
8/23/2012 c12 Guest
This confrontation is interesting, esp as it mirrors the scenes you depict in the past. I'm still scared sh*tless for Tony, and I don't like the fact that Bella and Reni are so far away. I'm interested to see how this all plays out.
This confrontation is interesting, esp as it mirrors the scenes you depict in the past. I'm still scared sh*tless for Tony, and I don't like the fact that Bella and Reni are so far away. I'm interested to see how this all plays out.
8/23/2012 c12 velvetWhispers
ok still getting lost in the flashback and present, even with the change in script, and the voices inside his head. i love this fic , it is exciting and creative but I find it hard to follow still. Don't let that discourage you , just trying to help ya out.
ok still getting lost in the flashback and present, even with the change in script, and the voices inside his head. i love this fic , it is exciting and creative but I find it hard to follow still. Don't let that discourage you , just trying to help ya out.
8/23/2012 c12 
4ElspethGordie
thought you should know that I drop everything when I find you've posted a chapter. You are loved. ;)
4ElspethGordiethought you should know that I drop everything when I find you've posted a chapter. You are loved. ;)