for Resent8/23/2012 c12 lunjul
I agree with Tony after everything that the cullens put her through Bella is just going to forgive them? Can you say needy. Grow some Bella and protect your kids. I enjoy the story except it jumps around alot and sometimes its hard to follow
I agree with Tony after everything that the cullens put her through Bella is just going to forgive them? Can you say needy. Grow some Bella and protect your kids. I enjoy the story except it jumps around alot and sometimes its hard to follow
8/23/2012 c12 Angelik Angel
First thanks for the new update.
According loved his chapter with self defense that Tony is learning to use his powers alone. I wonder, Jasper had been watching the area of Bella's house to wait for Tony, then where is it to help Tony? If Jack knows that Tony is the son of Bella and Charlie's grandson who is a friend of Jack's father will be at least that would be in doubt even the appearance of Tony knock your age? Would send one of them to fetch a Cullen opine about it?
And again you left us hanging at the end hem, making the readers here have already become fans wanting more to know where this is going or stop, if Tony will injure or kill any, some or all of the wolves? yes I'm in favor of Tony and believe in its power of shards, hehe. Please do not take this much time to update because we got mad here to learn more of this fantastic writer lol. XOXO
First thanks for the new update.
According loved his chapter with self defense that Tony is learning to use his powers alone. I wonder, Jasper had been watching the area of Bella's house to wait for Tony, then where is it to help Tony? If Jack knows that Tony is the son of Bella and Charlie's grandson who is a friend of Jack's father will be at least that would be in doubt even the appearance of Tony knock your age? Would send one of them to fetch a Cullen opine about it?
And again you left us hanging at the end hem, making the readers here have already become fans wanting more to know where this is going or stop, if Tony will injure or kill any, some or all of the wolves? yes I'm in favor of Tony and believe in its power of shards, hehe. Please do not take this much time to update because we got mad here to learn more of this fantastic writer lol. XOXO
8/23/2012 c12 
24Camilla10
I can't figure out almost nothing. And it is not that I am a newbie at fanfic. I don't undestand Tony's talents (sherds .. .wtf), I am totally confused about past and present and you are surely not helping with it. Please consider that we are not reading a fic page after page till lthe end but in very spaced chapters and try to make it easier, if you can.
24Camilla10I can't figure out almost nothing. And it is not that I am a newbie at fanfic. I don't undestand Tony's talents (sherds .. .wtf), I am totally confused about past and present and you are surely not helping with it. Please consider that we are not reading a fic page after page till lthe end but in very spaced chapters and try to make it easier, if you can.
7/5/2012 c11 5karis j anderson
Finally got to read the update...worth the wait, cliffie and all!
Good luck in the USAF and thank you for your service!
Lisa
(wckdqueen on ADF)
5karis j andersonFinally got to read the update...worth the wait, cliffie and all!
Good luck in the USAF and thank you for your service!
Lisa
(wckdqueen on ADF)
7/1/2012 c11 6april09-TW
I finally got to this chapter-yay! (I've been meaning to read it for a while but the story is so intricate that I wanted to review the prior few chapters first and I'm glad I did.) I hope that Tony doesn't die, that's all I have to say!
Okay, there's more...I didn't realize Nahuel was a bad guy, maybe it's been a while and I need to re-read the beginning chapters too, but I love the depth you have in this story. Hope Miri is okay too.
(I think you're off to basic training so we may not get an update for a while, but hopefully you're thinking about the story during your down time...wait, is there any down time during basic training?)
Great chapter!
6april09-TWI finally got to this chapter-yay! (I've been meaning to read it for a while but the story is so intricate that I wanted to review the prior few chapters first and I'm glad I did.) I hope that Tony doesn't die, that's all I have to say!
Okay, there's more...I didn't realize Nahuel was a bad guy, maybe it's been a while and I need to re-read the beginning chapters too, but I love the depth you have in this story. Hope Miri is okay too.
(I think you're off to basic training so we may not get an update for a while, but hopefully you're thinking about the story during your down time...wait, is there any down time during basic training?)
Great chapter!
6/27/2012 c11 1JMaire
Wow, Alice... or Esme. Bella's son is MISSING (maybe being hunted by wolves) her daughter may be SICK, but your reaction is to put pressure her into making Edward feel better about ABANDONING HER and her CHILDREN?
1JMaireWow, Alice... or Esme. Bella's son is MISSING (maybe being hunted by wolves) her daughter may be SICK, but your reaction is to put pressure her into making Edward feel better about ABANDONING HER and her CHILDREN?
6/25/2012 c11 2AuntiePanda
I absolutely love this story, I really like how Tony hates Edward, as in most fics of this kind, the child always wants to know him etc and personally I think I'd be pretty pissed if I was in a similar situation, so I really like you're characters :)
Leaving your chapter on a cliffie though, now thats just not fair :(
Please update soon! :D
2AuntiePandaI absolutely love this story, I really like how Tony hates Edward, as in most fics of this kind, the child always wants to know him etc and personally I think I'd be pretty pissed if I was in a similar situation, so I really like you're characters :)
Leaving your chapter on a cliffie though, now thats just not fair :(
Please update soon! :D
6/22/2012 c11 Silver Water 7
please tell me we get to see a fierce protective version of Bella soon. I wanna see her kick the wolves ass for daring to hurt her son.
please tell me we get to see a fierce protective version of Bella soon. I wanna see her kick the wolves ass for daring to hurt her son.
6/11/2012 c11 mara jade77
Fab new chapter. Always stop everything when I see that you've updated. Love the action. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Fab new chapter. Always stop everything when I see that you've updated. Love the action. Can't wait to see what happens next.
6/11/2012 c11 Twilight-series-junkie
great chapter, i hope we won't have to wait too long for next one. Also, I'd like for everything to fall into place...just being inpatient:)
great chapter, i hope we won't have to wait too long for next one. Also, I'd like for everything to fall into place...just being inpatient:)
6/10/2012 c11 1FunkyWeeMonkey
I have to admit, I'm just a liiiiiitle bit obsessed with this fic. Pleeeeeaaaaase update soon! I hope we get to see sin father/son bonding with Tony and Edward. And it's very well written too :)
1FunkyWeeMonkeyI have to admit, I'm just a liiiiiitle bit obsessed with this fic. Pleeeeeaaaaase update soon! I hope we get to see sin father/son bonding with Tony and Edward. And it's very well written too :)