10/3/2013 c1 esther
i don't like the omake. the real story is good though! :D
i don't like the omake. the real story is good though! :D
7/30/2013 c1 AZEB
WAIT!
which one is the real one? the one when natsume said "she's my real bride" or the one when he said "of course. i love my sweet honey buns. guards, throw her OUT!"
WAIT!
which one is the real one? the one when natsume said "she's my real bride" or the one when he said "of course. i love my sweet honey buns. guards, throw her OUT!"
8/17/2011 c1 2Sins of Paradise
Hey this isn't really a review but hi am Alice the first winner in the story your name in it is fuuka right I like it hope to be your friends too :)
Hey this isn't really a review but hi am Alice the first winner in the story your name in it is fuuka right I like it hope to be your friends too :)
5/4/2011 c1 1Melsaurus
Wow, I am soo confused. If it weren't a songfic, I would have said make another chapter. Well written : ) thanks x
caio
Wow, I am soo confused. If it weren't a songfic, I would have said make another chapter. Well written : ) thanks x
caio
3/31/2011 c1 BABYYY
F U C K luna.!
she's getting on my nerves
F U C K luna.!
she's getting on my nerves
2/21/2011 c1 Lucifer Kyoya
I think this "chapter" is very good to the fact i doubt that anyone saw that kindia ending coming.
I think this "chapter" is very good to the fact i doubt that anyone saw that kindia ending coming.
2/21/2011 c1 gakuen alice fan 12354685
OMG! u have to make u sequel! this is so good ! :)
OMG! u have to make u sequel! this is so good ! :)
2/21/2011 c1 5NeitherSaneNorInsane
The imams doesn't make sense to me. Would natsume really say sweet hunny buns. I shudder at the thought. You should have made it longer
The imams doesn't make sense to me. Would natsume really say sweet hunny buns. I shudder at the thought. You should have made it longer
2/20/2011 c1 Guest
That was a twisted ending what could have happened and the reason why it never will
That was a twisted ending what could have happened and the reason why it never will
2/20/2011 c1 coco
i like it. :o
i like it. :o