for The Dark Lord's Equal9/8/2023 c1 suziq968
This was ridiculously convoluted and really entertaining anyway. Harry's inner commentary is just that good. Thanks for the laughs.
This was ridiculously convoluted and really entertaining anyway. Harry's inner commentary is just that good. Thanks for the laughs.
6/21/2023 c6 
9WyrdSmith
My 16 year old son came into the bedroom and asked why I was snorting or did I just fart?
I do not snort. Not even air. In any way.
So, after he returned my pillow and ignored my demand for a refund on my DNA, he rephrased his question. I read him a paragraph — no clue which one. After smirking, he told me to send it to him.
An hour or so later, his older brother entered his bedroom and asked what he was snorting about or did he just fart?
And that is why mothers don’t need magic to manage our children. We have already done so with our DNA. The rest is just product testing.
9WyrdSmithMy 16 year old son came into the bedroom and asked why I was snorting or did I just fart?
I do not snort. Not even air. In any way.
So, after he returned my pillow and ignored my demand for a refund on my DNA, he rephrased his question. I read him a paragraph — no clue which one. After smirking, he told me to send it to him.
An hour or so later, his older brother entered his bedroom and asked what he was snorting about or did he just fart?
And that is why mothers don’t need magic to manage our children. We have already done so with our DNA. The rest is just product testing.
6/8/2023 c2 ymrgf
Tedious fic to read. Just use simple line break instead of get creative using quotation mark followed by comma. Most fic filled with monologues from single POV and coupled with unimaginative writing, it's like reading textbook. You know when you queueing and see someone in front of you dilly-dallying too long and you want kick their asses for that? That's how I feel when I'm reading MC's pov, with said MC is the one who stand in front of me.
Tedious fic to read. Just use simple line break instead of get creative using quotation mark followed by comma. Most fic filled with monologues from single POV and coupled with unimaginative writing, it's like reading textbook. You know when you queueing and see someone in front of you dilly-dallying too long and you want kick their asses for that? That's how I feel when I'm reading MC's pov, with said MC is the one who stand in front of me.
5/20/2023 c4 hdres
Great story. I am really enjoying Harry’s commentary and particularly how he details doing no work. Thank you for sharing your fun story
Great story. I am really enjoying Harry’s commentary and particularly how he details doing no work. Thank you for sharing your fun story
5/17/2023 c1 hdres
Interesting story. I like how Harry and Neville are fixing things. I also like the different POV sections. Thank you for sharing your story
Interesting story. I like how Harry and Neville are fixing things. I also like the different POV sections. Thank you for sharing your story
4/17/2023 c6 Ultach
Yep! I made it to the end...(snicker!)
Thanks. Crazy, wacky, totally space cadet HP with a few good jokes. What's next?
Yep! I made it to the end...(snicker!)
Thanks. Crazy, wacky, totally space cadet HP with a few good jokes. What's next?
3/7/2023 c6 Guest
To, two, too
To, two, too
11/18/2022 c6 1Darknessdawns
This is the most unusual fic I have ever read. I honestly spent most of it laughing. Things were just so out there, but worked amazingly well. Harry was so much more than I expected and I loved the little views into his life that had turned him into the crazy badass he is. The only thing I really wish was different ways that you left a list of the stories you took ideas and quotes from. I really want to read them all.
1DarknessdawnsThis is the most unusual fic I have ever read. I honestly spent most of it laughing. Things were just so out there, but worked amazingly well. Harry was so much more than I expected and I loved the little views into his life that had turned him into the crazy badass he is. The only thing I really wish was different ways that you left a list of the stories you took ideas and quotes from. I really want to read them all.