for The Dark Lord's Equal1/30/2022 c3 Makimass
holy shit this fic is one of the worse fic I've read, how can anyone even read this with the annoying random perspective..4th wall breaking? Narcissistic harry? Bad characterizations? Cringey Dialogues? Switching perspectives where you have to guess who's bloody talking? It's all in this fic..
holy shit this fic is one of the worse fic I've read, how can anyone even read this with the annoying random perspective..4th wall breaking? Narcissistic harry? Bad characterizations? Cringey Dialogues? Switching perspectives where you have to guess who's bloody talking? It's all in this fic..
1/24/2022 c3 Guest
The way you described Molly means you like being fucked in the ass and being henpicked by any women because you lack a spine, balls, and any kind of solidarity that would make you have any value. Go back to sucking shit you loser.
The way you described Molly means you like being fucked in the ass and being henpicked by any women because you lack a spine, balls, and any kind of solidarity that would make you have any value. Go back to sucking shit you loser.
1/14/2022 c6 Grenn
I forgot that I already read it, and so I went and read it again. Second time. Because it's damn hilarious reading, creative and level headed and showing a deep undertstanding of people's psych. Don't why I haven't favorited it before, but I'm going to do that now.
You know, this Harry's obsession with other men's wives got me thinking. And the more I think about it, the more sure I am that trying to marry Hermione yourself is a very bad idea. You may have decent table manners, and you never snore, but the moment will come when you forget to lower the toilet seat or throw your sock on a chair, or something else you can't really predict. And then it will start. You filling the role Ron used to play, the enemy. Kind of a relation she'd be happy to put a blood curse on, or memory charm into identity loss. It's a gamble when you stake everything on the idea that your wand is magical enough to make her forget about any flaw you might have.
In fact, I've got a quote on the matter. It's from a great fic in Russian about Filch reinventing his life after haveing a stroke. Here's my translation:
"Oh, Molly! If you had a quarter as much brains as you have tits, we would have a carnival. Without the brains starts the comparison of the lover and the husband, then comes by the novatory idea of making the carnival everlasting. To start hating your chubby man, to humiliate him, to rob. To build a new nest out of the stolen shards, only to one day realize that a carnaval always comes to an end."
Edvin, "Argus".
I forgot that I already read it, and so I went and read it again. Second time. Because it's damn hilarious reading, creative and level headed and showing a deep undertstanding of people's psych. Don't why I haven't favorited it before, but I'm going to do that now.
You know, this Harry's obsession with other men's wives got me thinking. And the more I think about it, the more sure I am that trying to marry Hermione yourself is a very bad idea. You may have decent table manners, and you never snore, but the moment will come when you forget to lower the toilet seat or throw your sock on a chair, or something else you can't really predict. And then it will start. You filling the role Ron used to play, the enemy. Kind of a relation she'd be happy to put a blood curse on, or memory charm into identity loss. It's a gamble when you stake everything on the idea that your wand is magical enough to make her forget about any flaw you might have.
In fact, I've got a quote on the matter. It's from a great fic in Russian about Filch reinventing his life after haveing a stroke. Here's my translation:
"Oh, Molly! If you had a quarter as much brains as you have tits, we would have a carnival. Without the brains starts the comparison of the lover and the husband, then comes by the novatory idea of making the carnival everlasting. To start hating your chubby man, to humiliate him, to rob. To build a new nest out of the stolen shards, only to one day realize that a carnaval always comes to an end."
Edvin, "Argus".
12/28/2021 c4 
49EdTheBeast
Sorry but Deadwoodpecker is a H/G fan. No can do, think it is a potion hazard. Now H/G/HG is fine, H/G/LL is also, or any Harry/ other girl or harem with Ginny is OK.
49EdTheBeastSorry but Deadwoodpecker is a H/G fan. No can do, think it is a potion hazard. Now H/G/HG is fine, H/G/LL is also, or any Harry/ other girl or harem with Ginny is OK.
10/31/2021 c5 BerserkLittleCook
For most of the shifts I'm like "wtf is happening!" and it's not the fault of the first person perspective. It's just your total refusal to describe places and circumstances in any length at all
For most of the shifts I'm like "wtf is happening!" and it's not the fault of the first person perspective. It's just your total refusal to describe places and circumstances in any length at all
10/31/2021 c4 BerserkLittleCook
If you either kill everyone or create a new world which doesn't change the present world, isn't the whole plan pointless either way? Unless you managed to later merge the two worlds into one without killing anyone
If you either kill everyone or create a new world which doesn't change the present world, isn't the whole plan pointless either way? Unless you managed to later merge the two worlds into one without killing anyone
10/25/2021 c6 Yasmanian Devil
I have to tell you, even if I didn’t get all of the references I still enjoyed reading this story so very much! It was really awesome and the last 2 lines of chapter 6 made it even more spectacular! Thanks for sharing!
I have to tell you, even if I didn’t get all of the references I still enjoyed reading this story so very much! It was really awesome and the last 2 lines of chapter 6 made it even more spectacular! Thanks for sharing!
10/24/2021 c6 21Duchess67
LOL
Oh my gosh, this was insane, but very enjoyable and good grief, Harry lived a long time!
21Duchess67LOL
Oh my gosh, this was insane, but very enjoyable and good grief, Harry lived a long time!
10/19/2021 c1 Duchess67
I don't get what Snape did. Um, at least I hope I don't!
This is a weird one, but intriguing, so I'll keep reading. :)
I don't get what Snape did. Um, at least I hope I don't!
This is a weird one, but intriguing, so I'll keep reading. :)
10/4/2021 c6 bella315
So, im still not 100% sure what I read…
It had very funny elements and the writing itself is quite good but many parts made very little to no sense in many aspects.
Kind of like there was/is a whole backstory world totally different from canon but it’s expected that the reader is super familiar with it.
And than all those jumps- like a LSD trip on E and Coke with a dusting of ketamine. And fuck, does that hurt when you finally wake up (if one even wakes up from something like that).
The ending made even less sense.
Also, Molly is one of his best friends and he’s fucking two of her sons’ wives at the same time while being married to Ginny? Yeah, makes even less sense.
I’m sorry for not being able to say more positive things, but Kafka is easier to read. But I appreciate the time and effort you but into this for our entertainment. It’s not like I could do any better.
So, im still not 100% sure what I read…
It had very funny elements and the writing itself is quite good but many parts made very little to no sense in many aspects.
Kind of like there was/is a whole backstory world totally different from canon but it’s expected that the reader is super familiar with it.
And than all those jumps- like a LSD trip on E and Coke with a dusting of ketamine. And fuck, does that hurt when you finally wake up (if one even wakes up from something like that).
The ending made even less sense.
Also, Molly is one of his best friends and he’s fucking two of her sons’ wives at the same time while being married to Ginny? Yeah, makes even less sense.
I’m sorry for not being able to say more positive things, but Kafka is easier to read. But I appreciate the time and effort you but into this for our entertainment. It’s not like I could do any better.
9/30/2021 c6 DarkBan
'Fuck the impossible' might have been the best way to end a story i have ever read. Well played.
'Fuck the impossible' might have been the best way to end a story i have ever read. Well played.