for The Dark Lord's Equal9/24/2021 c5 Nad19
i swear to god this is the most confusing fanfic i ever read, the pov is so confusing, the time travel also made everything confusing. shame, this would be even more fantastic if it didn't
i swear to god this is the most confusing fanfic i ever read, the pov is so confusing, the time travel also made everything confusing. shame, this would be even more fantastic if it didn't
9/20/2021 c6 nurray
Okay that was a Romp (the capital 'R' is deliberate). I particularly enjoyed the Fanfic author quotes and quite a few of them I do remember reading. The author names were familiar, for the most part.
Well done and thank you for sharing this.
Okay that was a Romp (the capital 'R' is deliberate). I particularly enjoyed the Fanfic author quotes and quite a few of them I do remember reading. The author names were familiar, for the most part.
Well done and thank you for sharing this.
8/29/2021 c1 
1Galeiam
I have no idea who or what or when and better yet how any perspective is working here.
1GaleiamI have no idea who or what or when and better yet how any perspective is working here.
8/28/2021 c5 HeckNo
A lot of what went on in this chapter didn't make any sense and I couldn't follow it properly.
I can understand you trying to make things funny, even when it wasn't necessary (as inherent funniness is better when it's not forced); but, adding in completely weird or not-funny elements and claiming they are funny is not entertaining.
A lot of what went on in this chapter didn't make any sense and I couldn't follow it properly.
I can understand you trying to make things funny, even when it wasn't necessary (as inherent funniness is better when it's not forced); but, adding in completely weird or not-funny elements and claiming they are funny is not entertaining.
8/17/2021 c6 Marshmallowmann
hello my dude/dudette. i made it to the end. thanks for writing this story. I'll check out your other stories if you have any
hello my dude/dudette. i made it to the end. thanks for writing this story. I'll check out your other stories if you have any
8/8/2021 c6 WyrdFlame
Gotta admit, it's been a LOOOOOOOONG time since I last saw the term 'balescream' used in any story (for obvious reasons, as few people can apparently manage to read all 14 books of Wheel of Time (15 if you count New Spring).
But yeah I'm hella impressed, you:
1. Managed to tell a story in first person perspective that I didn't hate on sheer principle. Must be the sheer lack of tedious introspection many people (myself included) descend into when trying to write 1st POV
2. Written a story that technically obeys all the canon rules and character descriptions (though I have to honestly admit I've read more interpretations that technically fit their very vague personalities than I care for, yours are far more credible than average.
3. Managed to weave it all together in such a way that YOUR story does not have any discernible plotholes. This may or may not be related to the fact that this story reads like a runaway train on caffeine and steroids and thus leaves very little time for a reader's mind to go 'hey, wait a minute!'
All in all, a very pleasant change of pace from the usual stuff I read, because after 800K stories most of the more predictable things have been done before and reading the nth iteration of 'Harry isn't actually a wet mop incapable of independent thought' and 'x character is actually a decent person' gets tedious very fast.
Gotta admit, it's been a LOOOOOOOONG time since I last saw the term 'balescream' used in any story (for obvious reasons, as few people can apparently manage to read all 14 books of Wheel of Time (15 if you count New Spring).
But yeah I'm hella impressed, you:
1. Managed to tell a story in first person perspective that I didn't hate on sheer principle. Must be the sheer lack of tedious introspection many people (myself included) descend into when trying to write 1st POV
2. Written a story that technically obeys all the canon rules and character descriptions (though I have to honestly admit I've read more interpretations that technically fit their very vague personalities than I care for, yours are far more credible than average.
3. Managed to weave it all together in such a way that YOUR story does not have any discernible plotholes. This may or may not be related to the fact that this story reads like a runaway train on caffeine and steroids and thus leaves very little time for a reader's mind to go 'hey, wait a minute!'
All in all, a very pleasant change of pace from the usual stuff I read, because after 800K stories most of the more predictable things have been done before and reading the nth iteration of 'Harry isn't actually a wet mop incapable of independent thought' and 'x character is actually a decent person' gets tedious very fast.
8/3/2021 c6 13Manatheron
F*ck the impossible indeed!
Incredibly well written, highly enjoyable! I will probably have to read it to my wife... And believe me that's high praise! I also didn't recognize one of the authors that you credited, so I now have something new to look into as well!
Thank you very much for sharing, and I look forward to seeing more of your works in the future!
13ManatheronF*ck the impossible indeed!
Incredibly well written, highly enjoyable! I will probably have to read it to my wife... And believe me that's high praise! I also didn't recognize one of the authors that you credited, so I now have something new to look into as well!
Thank you very much for sharing, and I look forward to seeing more of your works in the future!
7/17/2021 c1 So long ago
Ok… I adore your story. I was a bit confused in the beginning, but I’m sold on the idea.
The writing style reminds me heavily of JBern, which is a huge compliment. I hope you continue writing
Ok… I adore your story. I was a bit confused in the beginning, but I’m sold on the idea.
The writing style reminds me heavily of JBern, which is a huge compliment. I hope you continue writing
7/17/2021 c6 Sphere Warrior
"Just this once 'Everybody Lives'"
Except Cedric, I guess it's revenge for that time he broke Harry's perfect snitch-catching record.
"Just this once 'Everybody Lives'"
Except Cedric, I guess it's revenge for that time he broke Harry's perfect snitch-catching record.
6/26/2021 c2 Li-Ion78
what was the reason for harry revealing EVERYTHING about the future isnt it awkward to reveal personal shit to the peopl who hasnt done it in this time? it is sort of creepy. and childish to a high degree no fuckin cap. its like hes throwing away every advantage he has on these poeple
what was the reason for harry revealing EVERYTHING about the future isnt it awkward to reveal personal shit to the peopl who hasnt done it in this time? it is sort of creepy. and childish to a high degree no fuckin cap. its like hes throwing away every advantage he has on these poeple