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51seriousblahblah
hahaha absolutely brilliant and funny story! I liked how you showed both Sirius and Hermione struggling with their inner thoughts and trying to keep their feelings undercover. It really added tension to see how they each fought with themselves before finally giving up on suppressing it any longer. The ending where they got walked on by was also quite great.
Thanks :)
51seriousblahblahhahaha absolutely brilliant and funny story! I liked how you showed both Sirius and Hermione struggling with their inner thoughts and trying to keep their feelings undercover. It really added tension to see how they each fought with themselves before finally giving up on suppressing it any longer. The ending where they got walked on by was also quite great.
Thanks :)
9/1/2014 c1 4CarlitaM
See? Told you I'd read it soon!
Very nice fic! :D You can definitely feel the sparks flying between them. Feels a bit rushed, but it *is* a one shot, so I think you did a great job. You should write more. Get your ankles wet this time. Go for a longer fic :D
I know you can give us readers something amazing!
Cheers!
C.
4CarlitaMSee? Told you I'd read it soon!
Very nice fic! :D You can definitely feel the sparks flying between them. Feels a bit rushed, but it *is* a one shot, so I think you did a great job. You should write more. Get your ankles wet this time. Go for a longer fic :D
I know you can give us readers something amazing!
Cheers!
C.
7/11/2013 c1 2Heensta
Never thought I'd ship it, but you made me rethink Sirius/Hermione. A job well done!(:
2HeenstaNever thought I'd ship it, but you made me rethink Sirius/Hermione. A job well done!(:
10/3/2012 c1 fuckboy69
You should write more fanfiction, even though you think its crap. That's basically what everyone does on this site!
Loved this fic, wish you had other fics I could read.
You should write more fanfiction, even though you think its crap. That's basically what everyone does on this site!
Loved this fic, wish you had other fics I could read.
4/7/2011 c1 4leafhouse
wow i really love your writing style! this was great. if i had to comment on anything, it would just be the tense change and the fact that i wish it was longer (because i love what you did with the pairing and wanted to read more haha). but really, great job. hope you write more soon :) x
4leafhousewow i really love your writing style! this was great. if i had to comment on anything, it would just be the tense change and the fact that i wish it was longer (because i love what you did with the pairing and wanted to read more haha). but really, great job. hope you write more soon :) x
3/25/2011 c1 7DreamingOfASoullessIan
Loved it! I love Sirius/Hermione, and you made it even better!
-Dawn (DOASI)
7DreamingOfASoullessIanLoved it! I love Sirius/Hermione, and you made it even better!
-Dawn (DOASI)
3/2/2011 c1 2AtticFan
Congratulations on your first Fan Fiction!
I was very impressed with your voice, the characters were immediately spunky and it made the fic very amusing.
I wish that you'd drawn it out a little more and let us get a feel for the situation before she went for him, just because after everything I'm still curious as to what they were fighting about. :)
The only thing that really threw me off was that you switched tense somewhere in there from past to present.
I loved that they got caught by Harry and Ron in the end, and thought of Harry when I read 'green eyed monster'.
Overall, very entertaining- thanks!
2AtticFanCongratulations on your first Fan Fiction!
I was very impressed with your voice, the characters were immediately spunky and it made the fic very amusing.
I wish that you'd drawn it out a little more and let us get a feel for the situation before she went for him, just because after everything I'm still curious as to what they were fighting about. :)
The only thing that really threw me off was that you switched tense somewhere in there from past to present.
I loved that they got caught by Harry and Ron in the end, and thought of Harry when I read 'green eyed monster'.
Overall, very entertaining- thanks!