7/24/2016 c16 2alvie-pines
I love this, I'm gonna follow it, pls write more for me, thanks a bunch, you're the best, bye
I love this, I'm gonna follow it, pls write more for me, thanks a bunch, you're the best, bye
12/14/2014 c6 59Ghanaperu
This is an incredibly complicated chapter, complicated in a good way though. It was intricate and woven and stories within stories. I liked it, because I think you did a good job writing out the concept.
Thanks for sharing!
This is an incredibly complicated chapter, complicated in a good way though. It was intricate and woven and stories within stories. I liked it, because I think you did a good job writing out the concept.
Thanks for sharing!
12/14/2014 c5 Ghanaperu
Hahaha. As authors, we are kinda mean to our favorites, aren't we? But hey - it just means we love them! They should understand that. :)
Hahaha. As authors, we are kinda mean to our favorites, aren't we? But hey - it just means we love them! They should understand that. :)
12/14/2014 c4 Ghanaperu
Artistic license. That's how you knew what he was thinking. Or, it could be because you're such good friends. Good friends do that, you know - speak without speaking and read each others' minds.
Artistic license. That's how you knew what he was thinking. Or, it could be because you're such good friends. Good friends do that, you know - speak without speaking and read each others' minds.
12/14/2014 c3 Ghanaperu
Well, something from you that isn't comedic. You know, I actually like it. You're good at comedy, but this is good too. You should try stuff like this more often!
Well, something from you that isn't comedic. You know, I actually like it. You're good at comedy, but this is good too. You should try stuff like this more often!
12/14/2014 c2 Ghanaperu
I love his response to the whole situation, and the way he totally changes to topic at the end and you're perfectly fine with it. Funny!
I love his response to the whole situation, and the way he totally changes to topic at the end and you're perfectly fine with it. Funny!
2/3/2014 c14 Dustfinger'sGirl
Slightly better. But which idiot would call him dusty. That's just shit.
Slightly better. But which idiot would call him dusty. That's just shit.
2/3/2014 c10 Dustfinger'sGirl
What Shit! Dustfinger has no temper! And the flames would not reflect his freakin mood! And what are you too, in love? He's with Roxanne! And even if he wasn't, he would never be with you.
What Shit! Dustfinger has no temper! And the flames would not reflect his freakin mood! And what are you too, in love? He's with Roxanne! And even if he wasn't, he would never be with you.
2/2/2014 c5 Dustfinger'sGirl
You have portrayed Dustfinger as an absolute idiot when he isn't! He's hawt! You've practically ruined his character. You should like try again or something because this just sucks.
You have portrayed Dustfinger as an absolute idiot when he isn't! He's hawt! You've practically ruined his character. You should like try again or something because this just sucks.
9/2/2013 c7 Guest
yAy
yAy
9/2/2013 c3 Guest
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