for Cracks in the Pavement5/7 c1 areianjacks
Hi areianjacks here,
I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you
Hi areianjacks here,
I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you
5/22/2024 c20 Nikki1219
I thought I read this a long time ago but it wasnt on my list so i jumped right in without paying attention to what I was getting myself into. Your words are so beautiful and this story absolutely gutted me. I couldn't even review while I was reading because my anxiety was so high I just had to keep reading. Two days later and I finally feel over it enough to tell you how much I loved it. Thank you!
I thought I read this a long time ago but it wasnt on my list so i jumped right in without paying attention to what I was getting myself into. Your words are so beautiful and this story absolutely gutted me. I couldn't even review while I was reading because my anxiety was so high I just had to keep reading. Two days later and I finally feel over it enough to tell you how much I loved it. Thank you!
1/10/2024 c4 Courtstuffs
JFC Bella is immature. I already hate these people. So much drama and bullshit could be avoided by communication but no, she’s choosing to make herself the pariah and wallow in self-pity
JFC Bella is immature. I already hate these people. So much drama and bullshit could be avoided by communication but no, she’s choosing to make herself the pariah and wallow in self-pity
12/6/2023 c20 nothing2Me
This is one of my favorite stories. I always come back to reread from time to time. . Hurts my soul but written so beautifully
This is one of my favorite stories. I always come back to reread from time to time. . Hurts my soul but written so beautifully
2/19/2023 c18 Guest
Jeez, how many more metaphors can you pile into that chapter?
The first quarter was nothing but.
Alice saying he never ever left her was pretty disingenuous, he left her night after night, even on her birthday, all by choice.
Your Edward is the epitome of hypocrisy.
Jeez, how many more metaphors can you pile into that chapter?
The first quarter was nothing but.
Alice saying he never ever left her was pretty disingenuous, he left her night after night, even on her birthday, all by choice.
Your Edward is the epitome of hypocrisy.
2/19/2023 c12 Guest
He still can’t answer a fkg question. This is ridiculous.
He still can’t answer a fkg question. This is ridiculous.
2/19/2023 c9 Guest
Why can’t he just answer a fkg questions straightforwardly?
Why can’t he just answer a fkg questions straightforwardly?
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