for Made of Lies3/4/2012 c1 
1tunachurro
Oh man. From something cute to angst? I... I need more angst (...right, like it is SO healthy to read so much of it in one day...)
I love the dialogue here. I love how Roxas took his glove off, too. It looked like a small part, but it did have impact. :)
1tunachurroOh man. From something cute to angst? I... I need more angst (...right, like it is SO healthy to read so much of it in one day...)
I love the dialogue here. I love how Roxas took his glove off, too. It looked like a small part, but it did have impact. :)
2/21/2011 c1 Simply Cryptic
Depressing. I like it. xD
Very well written though, good portrayal of emotions.
Depressing. I like it. xD
Very well written though, good portrayal of emotions.
2/21/2011 c1 trap card
FINALLY POSTED ON FFN, GEEZ-uh i mean.
but anyway, i'm glad you posted it here so now i can fave it and review and love it. ;3;
i don't understand why you're always being so hard on yourself when it comes to your writing/fics. i thought this was pretty good! :c
i mean, sad, but very well-written. and it's pretty emotional-not just on the surface, but reading it as a whole (does that make sense? LOL orz).
i like how you can make the atmosphere so tense and such without over/underdoing it (i realize that's not a word oh well).
but yes, i quite like this fic, despite the huge levels of angst.
but a lot of rikuroku stuff is angsty, so good job? xD
keep it up! /insert heart here
FINALLY POSTED ON FFN, GEEZ-uh i mean.
but anyway, i'm glad you posted it here so now i can fave it and review and love it. ;3;
i don't understand why you're always being so hard on yourself when it comes to your writing/fics. i thought this was pretty good! :c
i mean, sad, but very well-written. and it's pretty emotional-not just on the surface, but reading it as a whole (does that make sense? LOL orz).
i like how you can make the atmosphere so tense and such without over/underdoing it (i realize that's not a word oh well).
but yes, i quite like this fic, despite the huge levels of angst.
but a lot of rikuroku stuff is angsty, so good job? xD
keep it up! /insert heart here