
4/15/2012 c1
2g-peachy-chan
What a heart-breaking story. Love that goes wrong is so... Annoying! I hope Roxas will get better with time. Maybe Xion could help him?
Nice piece! Really got all the right emotions in place! (:

What a heart-breaking story. Love that goes wrong is so... Annoying! I hope Roxas will get better with time. Maybe Xion could help him?
Nice piece! Really got all the right emotions in place! (:
6/23/2011 c1
5melianthus
Omg this was so emotional.
I kinda don't really like the namine/sora and roxas/xion pairings. I always felt that namine is supposed to be with roxas and no one else. but I like your writing skills.

Omg this was so emotional.
I kinda don't really like the namine/sora and roxas/xion pairings. I always felt that namine is supposed to be with roxas and no one else. but I like your writing skills.
6/12/2011 c1 GoldenWords
Good story, but I hate the Roxas Xion pairing (namixas fan)... Still, good job.
Good story, but I hate the Roxas Xion pairing (namixas fan)... Still, good job.
5/22/2011 c1
22FlowerLady-Aerith
Aww this was so bittersweet. I felt so bad for Roxas :( who knew Namine had it in her lol. But at least he now knows who is truly there for him, right? Was a good read :)

Aww this was so bittersweet. I felt so bad for Roxas :( who knew Namine had it in her lol. But at least he now knows who is truly there for him, right? Was a good read :)
4/4/2011 c1
5CheezeIsMyName
I really liked it :) I always really liked roxas and xion... Namine being the bad guy is a really cool change :D
Good Job!

I really liked it :) I always really liked roxas and xion... Namine being the bad guy is a really cool change :D
Good Job!
3/2/2011 c1 matty blackmore
so emotional..made me cry :')
so emotional..made me cry :')