for naruto the last ishvalen1/21/2013 c4 ImagineBreaker7
Ok a little unusual but this is a good story. I wonder what will happen next.
Ok a little unusual but this is a good story. I wonder what will happen next.
4/25/2012 c4 
25Spaceman
It's a Good Story, but the Format makes it hard to read. Needs more Spaces. Hope you Edit and Update Soon.
25SpacemanIt's a Good Story, but the Format makes it hard to read. Needs more Spaces. Hope you Edit and Update Soon.
4/1/2012 c4 death5367
well... which would be worse, being blown out from the inside, or being liquefied by sand? I wonder...
well... which would be worse, being blown out from the inside, or being liquefied by sand? I wonder...
3/28/2012 c4 The Man
You should continue.
You should continue.
1/20/2012 c3 Izanagi
love this
love this
1/11/2012 c4 shadowbroker13
Hey I really like you story but I noticed you stopes writing I really hope you continue righting this story because it's awesome
Hey I really like you story but I noticed you stopes writing I really hope you continue righting this story because it's awesome