for We are Lost12/8/2013 c3 Fast Frank
It appears that you have set Carrie's timeline a bit later than the original book. Even so, you seem to have an anachronism: "asked me to prom" is a fairly new usage. Carrie would have written, "asked me to the prom." My prom was in May 1966.
It appears that you have set Carrie's timeline a bit later than the original book. Even so, you seem to have an anachronism: "asked me to prom" is a fairly new usage. Carrie would have written, "asked me to the prom." My prom was in May 1966.
12/8/2013 c7 Fast Frank
No "p"s in Gryffindor.
No "p"s in Gryffindor.
10/23/2013 c1 Guest
Great beginning, off to read the next chapter. This is a good premise!
Great beginning, off to read the next chapter. This is a good premise!
3/26/2013 c18 James Birdsong
Cool four chapters.
Cool four chapters.
11/13/2012 c15 
5carealot
Wow! This piece was unbelievable. The way that you just molded the two stories together and how much you have accomplished with Carries character is great! Write on!
5carealotWow! This piece was unbelievable. The way that you just molded the two stories together and how much you have accomplished with Carries character is great! Write on!