1/13/2013 c36 Guest
I loved this ending and enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing this with everyone.
I loved this ending and enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing this with everyone.
10/21/2012 c18 9Anne Shirley Cullen
Ooh I so love this story I have read it all in two days. Please up date soon!
I can't wait to read what happens next.
Ooh I so love this story I have read it all in two days. Please up date soon!
I can't wait to read what happens next.
8/7/2012 c36 1lei sun
I love this ending. It shows even though their imprint was broken the spirits weren't wrong in putting them together. They still were able to connect and build on the love that was already there. I wish you would have written about him proposing to her. They have been together for two years. What is up with the rest of the cullens not talking to jake? That seemed a little odd. Great ending.
I love this ending. It shows even though their imprint was broken the spirits weren't wrong in putting them together. They still were able to connect and build on the love that was already there. I wish you would have written about him proposing to her. They have been together for two years. What is up with the rest of the cullens not talking to jake? That seemed a little odd. Great ending.
7/16/2012 c35 1lei sun
I'm happy you had them end up together it was destiny. I like that rose and emmett told jake to let nessie fight for him that would show they were meant to be. She in the end did exactly that. How nice it is to see her finally appreciate jake and the love he feels for her.
I'm happy you had them end up together it was destiny. I like that rose and emmett told jake to let nessie fight for him that would show they were meant to be. She in the end did exactly that. How nice it is to see her finally appreciate jake and the love he feels for her.
6/21/2012 c34 1lei sun
I don't want the alternate ending. I want jacob and nessie to be together. The imprint is telling them this is their soulmate. That no matter how long it takes them to find each other they will because it's destiny. To have them just be friends says the imprint magic is wrong and this isn't their true soulmate and just someone they fell in love with and I don't believe that. If your story is written in canon than they most definitely should end up together forever. I mean we're to believe that nessie is going to go through eternity watching all her eventual loves age and die. She never gets her happy ending unless she turns her lover into a vampire. NO! I want the happily ever after for the two of them.
I don't want the alternate ending. I want jacob and nessie to be together. The imprint is telling them this is their soulmate. That no matter how long it takes them to find each other they will because it's destiny. To have them just be friends says the imprint magic is wrong and this isn't their true soulmate and just someone they fell in love with and I don't believe that. If your story is written in canon than they most definitely should end up together forever. I mean we're to believe that nessie is going to go through eternity watching all her eventual loves age and die. She never gets her happy ending unless she turns her lover into a vampire. NO! I want the happily ever after for the two of them.
6/20/2012 c34 Hanora
Sorry I've not been reviewing regularly real life is kicking my but. It will be interesting to have them go back to La push. Are they all going to become hermits ?
Looking forward to more.
Sorry I've not been reviewing regularly real life is kicking my but. It will be interesting to have them go back to La push. Are they all going to become hermits ?
Looking forward to more.
5/28/2012 c33 13luv2beloved
He can't leave. Or Ness needs to go with him. I want this to be a happy ending...
He can't leave. Or Ness needs to go with him. I want this to be a happy ending...
5/26/2012 c31 TLynnson
So sad, the story is so dramatic. Really love your writing style and character development. I care about them and wait to find out the outcome.
So sad, the story is so dramatic. Really love your writing style and character development. I care about them and wait to find out the outcome.
5/25/2012 c32 shadowsdream19
I hope they end up together again and form an even closer bond with each other. I've enjoyed reading your story and im quite curious as to the alternate endings you were thinking about. I wouldn't mind reading both. I am sad to see the story is coming to an end, but im sure it will be an interesting closing.
I hope they end up together again and form an even closer bond with each other. I've enjoyed reading your story and im quite curious as to the alternate endings you were thinking about. I wouldn't mind reading both. I am sad to see the story is coming to an end, but im sure it will be an interesting closing.
5/24/2012 c32 hannah luker
i really liked this chapter the story should keep going for a little while. i would like to hear an alternate ending. you really need to write more fan fiction over the summer! i LOVE Listen to the Beating of My Heart! :)
i really liked this chapter the story should keep going for a little while. i would like to hear an alternate ending. you really need to write more fan fiction over the summer! i LOVE Listen to the Beating of My Heart! :)
5/24/2012 c32 1lei sun
I'm a little confused on your alternative ending option. Is the alternative ending them finding true love without the imprint or is it her and jacob breaking up and falling in love with different people. You need to be more specific. You still haven't told us what happened to the coven that they fought two chapters ago. Could you explain why she wanted to hurt jacob and ness and who she was doing it for. Was it because she wanted to help nahuel win ness's heart. My personal preference would be to have them end up together with or without the imprint. I can't believe it's near the end of this story all ready sad to see it over.
I'm a little confused on your alternative ending option. Is the alternative ending them finding true love without the imprint or is it her and jacob breaking up and falling in love with different people. You need to be more specific. You still haven't told us what happened to the coven that they fought two chapters ago. Could you explain why she wanted to hurt jacob and ness and who she was doing it for. Was it because she wanted to help nahuel win ness's heart. My personal preference would be to have them end up together with or without the imprint. I can't believe it's near the end of this story all ready sad to see it over.