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10Twilight Kyu
Suspenseful indeed. Who's gonna save Ankh from certain death?
Keep it up!
10Twilight KyuSuspenseful indeed. Who's gonna save Ankh from certain death?
Keep it up!
4/28/2012 c85 33Enji86
Have just reading three chapter at once.
There's just four kids in the attic (Andy, Ayumi, Genta and Mitsuhiko), so why you keep saying there's five kids?
Kaito and Ran share their stupidity. Kaito should have known that Ran knew about Shinichi and Ankh because he has stalked Ankh back then, but he insisted to use that stupid trick and Ran fell for it.
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33Enji86Have just reading three chapter at once.
There's just four kids in the attic (Andy, Ayumi, Genta and Mitsuhiko), so why you keep saying there's five kids?
Kaito and Ran share their stupidity. Kaito should have known that Ran knew about Shinichi and Ankh because he has stalked Ankh back then, but he insisted to use that stupid trick and Ran fell for it.
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4/24/2012 c84 10Twilight Kyu
Getting more and more intense with a lot of trouble/fights going on.
Keep it up!
10Twilight KyuGetting more and more intense with a lot of trouble/fights going on.
Keep it up!
4/23/2012 c13 63FutureTrunksFan94
Thanks for inviting me to read your stories. I read this one and the other part, and I have to say, I'm impressed by how well you've managed to incorporate DC with this series called "Kamen Rider" (which I have NEVER seen, so pardon my ignorance) and I am thrilled to see that you are doing stuff with the Higurashi gang.
Might you be interested in reading "The Travelers Chronicles by Alaena F. Dragonstar?" Her story is a crossover series as well featuring Kaito and Shinichi traveing to different universes. I really like what you're doing here, with the exception of one thing: it's a little confusing when you have Shinichi go back and forth from being Conan to himself "in a few minutes?" Here I thought that it takes him a long time to go back from being Conan to himself, and shouldn't he be staying in his body for only twenty-four hours? At the longest, his experience with Apotox that allowed him to stay in his body resulted in two days (The Desperate Revival arc)
The shortest was probably the "Murderer Shinichi Kudo" arc where he shrunk back into Conan after taking an antidote three hours previously. The present tense in which you have the story is a little, well...different from what I imagined, but it's nice to see innovation once in a while. That's part of being a good author.
Anyway, I wil keep reading this story to the end.
_KamenTantei
63FutureTrunksFan94Thanks for inviting me to read your stories. I read this one and the other part, and I have to say, I'm impressed by how well you've managed to incorporate DC with this series called "Kamen Rider" (which I have NEVER seen, so pardon my ignorance) and I am thrilled to see that you are doing stuff with the Higurashi gang.
Might you be interested in reading "The Travelers Chronicles by Alaena F. Dragonstar?" Her story is a crossover series as well featuring Kaito and Shinichi traveing to different universes. I really like what you're doing here, with the exception of one thing: it's a little confusing when you have Shinichi go back and forth from being Conan to himself "in a few minutes?" Here I thought that it takes him a long time to go back from being Conan to himself, and shouldn't he be staying in his body for only twenty-four hours? At the longest, his experience with Apotox that allowed him to stay in his body resulted in two days (The Desperate Revival arc)
The shortest was probably the "Murderer Shinichi Kudo" arc where he shrunk back into Conan after taking an antidote three hours previously. The present tense in which you have the story is a little, well...different from what I imagined, but it's nice to see innovation once in a while. That's part of being a good author.
Anyway, I wil keep reading this story to the end.
_KamenTantei
4/18/2012 c83 10Twilight Kyu
So the Phantom Thief Kid is finally caught. This is getting more intense.
Keep it up!
10Twilight KyuSo the Phantom Thief Kid is finally caught. This is getting more intense.
Keep it up!
4/15/2012 c82 33Enji86
Nice fight. Cute yummies. XD
I'm looking forward to the airship chapter.
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33Enji86Nice fight. Cute yummies. XD
I'm looking forward to the airship chapter.
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4/15/2012 c82 10Twilight Kyu
Wow... I totally didn't see that coming. Really, I never expect that the Yummies are based on the Keroro Platoon. I don't know if I should be laughing or finding it ironic that the platoon is the main characters of their series and they're the antagonists in this fic. Sorta.
Now I'm curious to see who else gonna show up in the next chapter.
Keep it up!
10Twilight KyuWow... I totally didn't see that coming. Really, I never expect that the Yummies are based on the Keroro Platoon. I don't know if I should be laughing or finding it ironic that the platoon is the main characters of their series and they're the antagonists in this fic. Sorta.
Now I'm curious to see who else gonna show up in the next chapter.
Keep it up!
3/30/2012 c80 10Twilight Kyu
Oooh, so we got some of the casts from 'The Lost Ship In The Sky' here. This should be interesting.
But with Mezuru around and Jirokichi has his plan in motion, things will get tough for our protagonists.
Keep it up!
10Twilight KyuOooh, so we got some of the casts from 'The Lost Ship In The Sky' here. This should be interesting.
But with Mezuru around and Jirokichi has his plan in motion, things will get tough for our protagonists.
Keep it up!
3/30/2012 c78 Twilight Kyu
Jirokichi just made a bad move using those Medals as bait for Phantom Thief Kid. He had it coming if the Greed ended up using him as the next 'host'.
Keep it up!
Jirokichi just made a bad move using those Medals as bait for Phantom Thief Kid. He had it coming if the Greed ended up using him as the next 'host'.
Keep it up!
3/24/2012 c80 33Enji86
Wow, Nakamori-keibu is very mature in this fanfic. XD
I wonder how Kyuji will get into the airship. Does he have the ability to fly or there's some other way? And will Kyuji arrive on time?
I really like this fanfic so I hope you will be back soon.
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33Enji86Wow, Nakamori-keibu is very mature in this fanfic. XD
I wonder how Kyuji will get into the airship. Does he have the ability to fly or there's some other way? And will Kyuji arrive on time?
I really like this fanfic so I hope you will be back soon.
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3/22/2012 c79 Enji86
I can't imagine Shinichi seeing Shiho as sister, considering their interaction in DC series. XD
Ankh was so sly, but is he sure he didn't do that because he's jealous after he know that Shiho has feelings for Shinichi? XD
The winner of the catfight has been decided from the start. Ran is karate queen while Shiho is bookworm.
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I can't imagine Shinichi seeing Shiho as sister, considering their interaction in DC series. XD
Ankh was so sly, but is he sure he didn't do that because he's jealous after he know that Shiho has feelings for Shinichi? XD
The winner of the catfight has been decided from the start. Ran is karate queen while Shiho is bookworm.
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3/15/2012 c78 Enji86
I get the feeling that when Kyuji tried to calm Shiho and Ankh down, he was jealous. XD
I don't know why and don't understand why, but it seems to me that you tried to make Ran's relationship with Ankh and Kyuji is more closer than Shiho's relationship with the two although Ran has just joined the gang. It seems Ran's presence and role in this story is important and Shiho is useless and did nothing for the progress of the gang and the story.
Shiho is my favorite character and I can't stand seeing her being useless in a story.
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I get the feeling that when Kyuji tried to calm Shiho and Ankh down, he was jealous. XD
I don't know why and don't understand why, but it seems to me that you tried to make Ran's relationship with Ankh and Kyuji is more closer than Shiho's relationship with the two although Ran has just joined the gang. It seems Ran's presence and role in this story is important and Shiho is useless and did nothing for the progress of the gang and the story.
Shiho is my favorite character and I can't stand seeing her being useless in a story.
Update!