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5/1/2017 c5 Guest
I hate u how cld u d tis 2 m
11/28/2011 c5 3ScarlettA.Cullen
Maybe it could have to do with something about edward pleading with alic to get her out of the bathroom and make her come and speak with him at once because he has something very important to tell her (which you can come up with) and then going on to bella and edward talking about how tanya did something and that he needs bellas help with something

it's just a suggestion
11/28/2011 c5 Withafullmetalheart
She could overhear Tanya having some type of affair or say that she is purposely avoiding getting pregnant.
11/27/2011 c4 Lily
Omg! Please updat soon!
11/27/2011 c5 verity
fantastic storyline so far, very very good. ideas for the next chapter... well maybe she could overhear Edward talking to himself and it could be him describing a emotion of either love or hatred..(u choose) if hatred you could make it so that edward realises he loves bella, but bella could die givng birth, thats just a trajedy idea. for a happy ending, bella could NEARLY die them edward tells her he loves her? idk, those r just my suggestons, but whtever happens, please try n keep this story going, because i personally think its original captivaing and all in all a great storyluine! keep it up!

Verity Xx
11/27/2011 c5 singingcaro
Maybe Tanya could be a kind of spy to an enemy kingdom of England?
5/22/2011 c4 snoodles
Can't wait to find out what she over heard.
5/18/2011 c4 lilmstran
loved it

keep going

can't wait to read the next chapter
5/15/2011 c4 No longer want Account
Great start to a story please update ASAP!
5/15/2011 c4 6egg671
love it. please please please update soon
5/15/2011 c4 vampiregurl
well i would be like that too. he needs to know just because he's a King he can't use people like that. she has feelings too.
5/14/2011 c4 JJ1234
great chapter :)
4/17/2011 c3 7Saphira.Flametongue
This is epic xD I can't wait for the next chapter!
4/12/2011 c3 vampiregurl
this is going to be interesting.

i like bella's attitude. such a fireball.
4/12/2011 c3 JJ1234
great chapter :)
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