6/14/2018 c1 Guest
Continue the Fucking story ... Please I love it :

6/4/2011 c1 6Aki666
I like it so far. But then again it's only the first chapter.

Hehe, well I'll see you in the next chapter!

But first a few words that is my motto.

I don't expect you to update right away. I know you have a life out side of your computer and you have an Actually Life that you most live. I'm not nor will I ever be one of those people that will ask you to update right away. Even if you don't finish this story I'll still read it over and over until you take it down.

So with that said have a happy and awesome life and I hope you live it to the fulliest! Ja Ne~!

4/18/2011 c1 Djomar
Well,I like what I read and I would like to read more of this story,it sounds interesting

2/28/2011 c1 DarkHinata91
it was great please continue

2/27/2011 c1 3The Sky Is Not Always Red
I like it so far.

Has the potential to be really good! The plot seems to be simple enough - unless there are some twists coming up (which will be entertaining enough). It's cute - Sasuke and Hinata are perfectly in character so it's believable. Goood job! Update soon!

2/27/2011 c1 3Rakero-chan
One more chapter please! I don't think the plot will allow for this to be a big story, but it will make an absolutely lovely two-shot!

2/26/2011 c1 1Rosie Thornet
This is cute, I like it, continue...