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18The Crystal Pen
Yo. It's been 7 years. You get hit by the 10 year bazooka or something?
18The Crystal PenYo. It's been 7 years. You get hit by the 10 year bazooka or something?
12/26/2016 c2 Guest
please update. I'm so curious...
please update. I'm so curious...
4/23/2011 c2 7smos
Oh no! HARU! O_O What's going to happen? Oh. man! You gotta update1 You're keeping me hangin here! Lol. I lvoe the way you write. Descriptive and very vivid! I love the suspense too, even though it sorta makes me crazy! O_O HARU~~~
Hope you update soon! xD
7smosOh no! HARU! O_O What's going to happen? Oh. man! You gotta update1 You're keeping me hangin here! Lol. I lvoe the way you write. Descriptive and very vivid! I love the suspense too, even though it sorta makes me crazy! O_O HARU~~~
Hope you update soon! xD
4/4/2011 c2 eyeglasses-kun
As expected, it was really good! I like the elements you're throwing in the story so far. There's an air of mystery in Haru's situation especially the last bit. I'm hoping Hibari will make his appearance soon? Update please! I'm intrigued and I would really like to know what happens next! ^_^
As expected, it was really good! I like the elements you're throwing in the story so far. There's an air of mystery in Haru's situation especially the last bit. I'm hoping Hibari will make his appearance soon? Update please! I'm intrigued and I would really like to know what happens next! ^_^
4/4/2011 c2 55Tsuki-chan93
Wow! This is sooooo cool; I need to read more :D please.
But the ending is still confuse to me; I guess that's going to be clear in the next chapter =)
Bye~!
55Tsuki-chan93Wow! This is sooooo cool; I need to read more :D please.
But the ending is still confuse to me; I guess that's going to be clear in the next chapter =)
Bye~!
4/4/2011 c2 Hevimankeli
Ooooh, interesting! This story seems slightly different from ´the rest so far, and I'm looking forward to see what happens next. It's still a bit early to say much more, but so far I'm liking this. :) Your writing style is nice, it doesn't drag on, but has enough detail to keep me interested. : D
Cheers,
¨~Hevi who was too lazy to log in...
Ooooh, interesting! This story seems slightly different from ´the rest so far, and I'm looking forward to see what happens next. It's still a bit early to say much more, but so far I'm liking this. :) Your writing style is nice, it doesn't drag on, but has enough detail to keep me interested. : D
Cheers,
¨~Hevi who was too lazy to log in...
4/4/2011 c2 1Asphen
Very good so far! The characters all seem to be good, though I felt the first half could have had a darker mood to it when Tsuna and the others were talking.
1AsphenVery good so far! The characters all seem to be good, though I felt the first half could have had a darker mood to it when Tsuna and the others were talking.
4/4/2011 c2 Abigail
When will Hibari appear? Great chapter btw.
When will Hibari appear? Great chapter btw.
4/4/2011 c2 Sweet Remembrance
Oh my god, what happened next? Did he die? Who shot him? I'm luvin' the action! This is a breath of air from your usual genre of humor and romance. UPDATE SOON!
Oh my god, what happened next? Did he die? Who shot him? I'm luvin' the action! This is a breath of air from your usual genre of humor and romance. UPDATE SOON!