
2/7 c32 Guest
I would love to see this fic finished! Please come back!
I would love to see this fic finished! Please come back!
1/22 c32 Guest
Wooowee. It's been literally years since I read twilight fanfiction, but something made me want to delve back in. What an absolute TREAT that this is the first story back I've read! I devoured this in a single day. I sincerely hope you update, but even if you don't, this is sincerely magnificent. Extremely well written, great characterizations, motives, and plot lines. Not to mention the spice Amazing!
Wooowee. It's been literally years since I read twilight fanfiction, but something made me want to delve back in. What an absolute TREAT that this is the first story back I've read! I devoured this in a single day. I sincerely hope you update, but even if you don't, this is sincerely magnificent. Extremely well written, great characterizations, motives, and plot lines. Not to mention the spice Amazing!
1/17 c32 Guest
Jake is an arrogant proud smelly asshole
Jake is an arrogant proud smelly asshole
1/11 c32 Guest
Good Lord. As much as I adore you, do spare us the constant empty promises. It’s been several months now since you last posted a chapter, despite your fervent assurances, upon your return from years of silence, that you would post consistently every week. One week became three, three turned into five, and now, here we are at the start of a new year, with no update in sight, despite your claim that you would try. So here’s what I propose: stop toying with our weary hearts and carry on with your life. When you're finally ready to post the next chapter, then by all means, do so. But please, I implore you, cease with the hollow declarations. I am drained!
Good Lord. As much as I adore you, do spare us the constant empty promises. It’s been several months now since you last posted a chapter, despite your fervent assurances, upon your return from years of silence, that you would post consistently every week. One week became three, three turned into five, and now, here we are at the start of a new year, with no update in sight, despite your claim that you would try. So here’s what I propose: stop toying with our weary hearts and carry on with your life. When you're finally ready to post the next chapter, then by all means, do so. But please, I implore you, cease with the hollow declarations. I am drained!
1/11 c32 mazonephe
Good Lord. As much as I adore you, do spare us the constant empty promises. It’s been several months now since you last posted a chapter, despite your fervent assurances, upon your return from years of silence, that you would post consistently every week. One week became three, three turned into five, and now, here we are at the start of a new year, with no update in sight, despite your claim that you would try. So here’s what I propose: stop toying with our weary hearts and carry on with your life. When you're finally ready to post the next chapter, then by all means, do so. But please, I implore you, cease with the hollow declarations. I am drained !
Good Lord. As much as I adore you, do spare us the constant empty promises. It’s been several months now since you last posted a chapter, despite your fervent assurances, upon your return from years of silence, that you would post consistently every week. One week became three, three turned into five, and now, here we are at the start of a new year, with no update in sight, despite your claim that you would try. So here’s what I propose: stop toying with our weary hearts and carry on with your life. When you're finally ready to post the next chapter, then by all means, do so. But please, I implore you, cease with the hollow declarations. I am drained !
12/13/2024 c32 Guest
Please update!
Please update!
12/1/2024 c8 LadySnowdon
Wow...I have no words! This is just amazing. I started reading this as I needed a fix of your writing after finishing FBR. I usually prefer completed fics, but there's lots here to read and its still ongoing, so that is great! I really like this as it's freed from canon constraints which makes it much more interesting, particularly the possibilities of where it may go. I like this Edward, he's independent, a little bit older so not high school age, he's exciting and he's not constrained like canon Edward was so he has freedom to do what he wants and get what he wants...I know he's Darkward, but he's not that bad I think, he hasn't harmed Bella (and he's helped her financially) and Newton definitely deserved what he got, as did the others. I'm a bit concerned about his potential mistakes though. As for Jacob...initially I thought he won't be like FBR Jake, but he's showed some darkness in this chapter so that doesn't bode well (I am not a Jacob/wolf fan at all!). Charlie needs a good shake but he means well, I guess, although I don't like the Charlie/Jake tag teaming thing to browbeat poor Bella into female submission (lol) get into this century Charlie! Hopefully Charlie will see the light, and realise Bella is stronger than he thinks. And as for Edward, I suspect the Cullens will be making further appearances in the future, whether he likes it not. I'm so excited as to where this story will go! Thank you for your writing, it is very much appreciated.
Wow...I have no words! This is just amazing. I started reading this as I needed a fix of your writing after finishing FBR. I usually prefer completed fics, but there's lots here to read and its still ongoing, so that is great! I really like this as it's freed from canon constraints which makes it much more interesting, particularly the possibilities of where it may go. I like this Edward, he's independent, a little bit older so not high school age, he's exciting and he's not constrained like canon Edward was so he has freedom to do what he wants and get what he wants...I know he's Darkward, but he's not that bad I think, he hasn't harmed Bella (and he's helped her financially) and Newton definitely deserved what he got, as did the others. I'm a bit concerned about his potential mistakes though. As for Jacob...initially I thought he won't be like FBR Jake, but he's showed some darkness in this chapter so that doesn't bode well (I am not a Jacob/wolf fan at all!). Charlie needs a good shake but he means well, I guess, although I don't like the Charlie/Jake tag teaming thing to browbeat poor Bella into female submission (lol) get into this century Charlie! Hopefully Charlie will see the light, and realise Bella is stronger than he thinks. And as for Edward, I suspect the Cullens will be making further appearances in the future, whether he likes it not. I'm so excited as to where this story will go! Thank you for your writing, it is very much appreciated.
11/23/2024 c32 Sandy
I have been following this story for while and I was so excited when you came back with more chapters but now i just wanna cry of sadness because probably I will never know how this story will end. You’re so talented and this story is more than amazing and don’t misunderstand my words but you have an army of fans, anxious, thrilled and happy for new chapters when you decided to come back after the hiatus. I totally understand you deserved time for whatever you need, specially for mental health but we’re really struggling with the disappointment and continuous hold up. I hope you can unless tell us something new to keep the hopes up and wait for this brilliant story or like some people think: Masterpiece. I wish you the best and hope everything is fine with you and your health.
I have been following this story for while and I was so excited when you came back with more chapters but now i just wanna cry of sadness because probably I will never know how this story will end. You’re so talented and this story is more than amazing and don’t misunderstand my words but you have an army of fans, anxious, thrilled and happy for new chapters when you decided to come back after the hiatus. I totally understand you deserved time for whatever you need, specially for mental health but we’re really struggling with the disappointment and continuous hold up. I hope you can unless tell us something new to keep the hopes up and wait for this brilliant story or like some people think: Masterpiece. I wish you the best and hope everything is fine with you and your health.
11/15/2024 c32 Alexis
I've been following your story for so long. I am elated to see it updated! I can't wait to see where this story goes. You have such a way with writing and this is by far one of the best written fanfictions I've ever come across. I love the way you write Edward and also love that your Bella isn't exhausting lol. I hope you're doing well!
I've been following your story for so long. I am elated to see it updated! I can't wait to see where this story goes. You have such a way with writing and this is by far one of the best written fanfictions I've ever come across. I love the way you write Edward and also love that your Bella isn't exhausting lol. I hope you're doing well!
11/11/2024 c32 mazoneph
Ah, dear female readers, let us gather in our collective grief, hands clasped, eyes wet with despair, as we mourn the latest, tragic disappearance of our beloved author, Aleeab4u. The Divine, in His infinite mischief, allowed us but a brief, glorious glimpse of her return—only to whisk her away once more, as if to taunt us with the brilliance we can no longer touch. It is with a heart heavy and soul weary that I pen these words of reluctant acceptance, but we must face the harsh truth: our illustrious author has ascended to such towering, godlike pursuits that we, her humble admirers, are left to wander the barren wasteland of her absence, clutching at the fading echoes of her eloquence.
Ah, dear female readers, let us gather in our collective grief, hands clasped, eyes wet with despair, as we mourn the latest, tragic disappearance of our beloved author, Aleeab4u. The Divine, in His infinite mischief, allowed us but a brief, glorious glimpse of her return—only to whisk her away once more, as if to taunt us with the brilliance we can no longer touch. It is with a heart heavy and soul weary that I pen these words of reluctant acceptance, but we must face the harsh truth: our illustrious author has ascended to such towering, godlike pursuits that we, her humble admirers, are left to wander the barren wasteland of her absence, clutching at the fading echoes of her eloquence.
10/13/2024 c32 Sweelise
Take the time you need, we'll be here. Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next one :)
Take the time you need, we'll be here. Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next one :)
10/1/2024 c32 Guest
Real life always comes first.
What a chapter! So much info to absorb. Can’t wait to see where this is going. Well done!
Real life always comes first.
What a chapter! So much info to absorb. Can’t wait to see where this is going. Well done!