for Prey for the Wicked10/1/2024 c32 Guest
Real life always comes first.
What a chapter! So much info to absorb. Can’t wait to see where this is going. Well done!
Real life always comes first.
What a chapter! So much info to absorb. Can’t wait to see where this is going. Well done!
10/2/2024 c32 CAMJ1993
Oo suspense! Am I correct in understanding that this whole story has been happening within 2wks?!
Oo suspense! Am I correct in understanding that this whole story has been happening within 2wks?!
10/1/2024 c32 thank-for-you
oh my! looks like we are going to see Cullens reunion! I love it! Will they help Edward to save Bella from Viktoria and co? Uh
Cant wait for an update
oh my! looks like we are going to see Cullens reunion! I love it! Will they help Edward to save Bella from Viktoria and co? Uh
Cant wait for an update
10/1/2024 c32 VryUnique
Huh... Great chapter.
The three Charlie was talking about, Jake's friends? It had sounded
like they were selling drugs. Another vampire, James?
I don't recall everything Jessica had said, I will have to go back and
look. I've read too many stories in between updates. I usually try to
read stories once they're complete but sometimes a story is too
compelling to wait.
Thanks for the update! It was awesome. Very exciting.
Huh... Great chapter.
The three Charlie was talking about, Jake's friends? It had sounded
like they were selling drugs. Another vampire, James?
I don't recall everything Jessica had said, I will have to go back and
look. I've read too many stories in between updates. I usually try to
read stories once they're complete but sometimes a story is too
compelling to wait.
Thanks for the update! It was awesome. Very exciting.
10/1/2024 c31 VryUnique
That's sad, poor girl. The fact that Edward is still paying emotional
penance for his mistake shows he isn't all bad. Him and Bella still
need to sit and talk, she can't feel like a prisoner.
That's sad, poor girl. The fact that Edward is still paying emotional
penance for his mistake shows he isn't all bad. Him and Bella still
need to sit and talk, she can't feel like a prisoner.
10/1/2024 c32 
1Alice's White Rabbit
I can't wait to see Jake asking Carlisle for help. That's not going to be easy for him, but I think he'll do it for Leah.
And, who's in the house with Bella?
Thanks!
Sally
1Alice's White RabbitI can't wait to see Jake asking Carlisle for help. That's not going to be easy for him, but I think he'll do it for Leah.
And, who's in the house with Bella?
Thanks!
Sally
10/1/2024 c32 pnkats
I wonder who’s at Bella’s house? My guess is it’s Jake & Leah wanting help to find Carlisle?
If not perhaps it’s one or all of the Cullens. I do hope they show up again because I really miss them!
Great chapter again as always.
Hope things settle down for you soon though. I will always be waiting!
I wonder who’s at Bella’s house? My guess is it’s Jake & Leah wanting help to find Carlisle?
If not perhaps it’s one or all of the Cullens. I do hope they show up again because I really miss them!
Great chapter again as always.
Hope things settle down for you soon though. I will always be waiting!
9/30/2024 c32 KatHat4
Why...did Bella just keep going downstairs, even though she knew someone was there and it wasn't Edward? And all the time, Edward dawdling around the diner to eavesdrop on Charlie. He kept on and on, and was trying to get uim to hurry! I hope all is well with Bella!
Why...did Bella just keep going downstairs, even though she knew someone was there and it wasn't Edward? And all the time, Edward dawdling around the diner to eavesdrop on Charlie. He kept on and on, and was trying to get uim to hurry! I hope all is well with Bella!
9/30/2024 c32 dpennell007
Any chapter that helps you reach the end game is welcome. If you can't get there I'm sure an outline of your final plans would do nicely. No one is expecting perfection.
Any chapter that helps you reach the end game is welcome. If you can't get there I'm sure an outline of your final plans would do nicely. No one is expecting perfection.