for Prey for the Wicked8/28/2024 c31 LaPumuckl
I don't think Edward did anything to Mary Adele but surely knows who did...
The jumping between povs here was interesting. I'm doubtful Jake and Edward will be as good friends as Ephraim and Edward were but maybe they're going to be able to be friendly around the other...
Because that way Leah might be able to get medical care without having to go out of town for each visitespecially if Sue is right with the differences about wolves and humans being that obvious already !
I'm sorry you're without a beta at the moment but at least I didn't see any real bad errors in here
I don't think Edward did anything to Mary Adele but surely knows who did...
The jumping between povs here was interesting. I'm doubtful Jake and Edward will be as good friends as Ephraim and Edward were but maybe they're going to be able to be friendly around the other...
Because that way Leah might be able to get medical care without having to go out of town for each visitespecially if Sue is right with the differences about wolves and humans being that obvious already !
I'm sorry you're without a beta at the moment but at least I didn't see any real bad errors in here
8/28/2024 c31 
1Alice's White Rabbit
Oh, Edward, what did you do? Did he really have something to do with that little girl's disappearance? Can't wait to find out.
Thanks!
Sally
1Alice's White RabbitOh, Edward, what did you do? Did he really have something to do with that little girl's disappearance? Can't wait to find out.
Thanks!
Sally
8/28/2024 c31 Rita01tx
Whatever happened with that little girl seems to have been the culmination of Edward's internal war with himself about bein' the loner in a family of mated couples, as well as the pull to try the "normal" vampire diet! Edward is the only one to answer that question *sigh!*
Whatever happened with that little girl seems to have been the culmination of Edward's internal war with himself about bein' the loner in a family of mated couples, as well as the pull to try the "normal" vampire diet! Edward is the only one to answer that question *sigh!*
8/28/2024 c31 Juxtaposition001
Awh what a huge relationship escalation these last two chapters! I know we heard the story of Edward's exodus from the Cullens through his POV.. but hearing it through his journals, the innocence and loneliness is a whole other side of him we don't see because of his self-loathing. Maybe Bella can help him get in touch with his humanity again, and he can finally learn to forgive himself ...and, most importantly, get over himself. I can't wait to see what's next in store for their relationship! xo
Awh what a huge relationship escalation these last two chapters! I know we heard the story of Edward's exodus from the Cullens through his POV.. but hearing it through his journals, the innocence and loneliness is a whole other side of him we don't see because of his self-loathing. Maybe Bella can help him get in touch with his humanity again, and he can finally learn to forgive himself ...and, most importantly, get over himself. I can't wait to see what's next in store for their relationship! xo
8/27/2024 c31 QueElle
Edward journal entries. The loneliness he experienced is crushing. Hope Bella is reaching a turning point that includes some acceptance (with some boundaries she needs to enforce).
Edward journal entries. The loneliness he experienced is crushing. Hope Bella is reaching a turning point that includes some acceptance (with some boundaries she needs to enforce).
8/27/2024 c31 pnkats
Bella asks - Oh Edward what did you so but I was thinking that perhaps it was someone else that had something to do with the girls disappearance and her obvious death?
You can just feel Edward’s loneliness and despair about being unmated by the way he writes what he’s feeling in his journal.
It sounds like he had an unusual relationship with Ephraim?
Would like to know the meaning of the stories title - Youhuo? I usually google these out of curiosity but I didn’t find anything on this one.
Bella asks - Oh Edward what did you so but I was thinking that perhaps it was someone else that had something to do with the girls disappearance and her obvious death?
You can just feel Edward’s loneliness and despair about being unmated by the way he writes what he’s feeling in his journal.
It sounds like he had an unusual relationship with Ephraim?
Would like to know the meaning of the stories title - Youhuo? I usually google these out of curiosity but I didn’t find anything on this one.
8/27/2024 c31 keeper of logolepsy
Wow, big turning point for Bella in this chapter. I wonder if Edward intentionally left those items within easy finding distance. Is he trying to open up to Bella? Because I can’t imagine that he’d be so careless to leave that stuff there given that Bella has already shown some curiosity towards learning about him. I also feel like he would have come up there because there’s no way he couldn’t hear her going into those other rooms upstairs. I hope he doesn’t shut her out if she tries to talk to him about those journals and the missing poster.
Wow, big turning point for Bella in this chapter. I wonder if Edward intentionally left those items within easy finding distance. Is he trying to open up to Bella? Because I can’t imagine that he’d be so careless to leave that stuff there given that Bella has already shown some curiosity towards learning about him. I also feel like he would have come up there because there’s no way he couldn’t hear her going into those other rooms upstairs. I hope he doesn’t shut her out if she tries to talk to him about those journals and the missing poster.
8/27/2024 c31 dpennell007
Edward can't help trying to provide Bella with everything - especially items she doesn't want or need, and she can't help resenting every last bit. Something has got to give!
Edward can't help trying to provide Bella with everything - especially items she doesn't want or need, and she can't help resenting every last bit. Something has got to give!
8/27/2024 c31 Luciana Joy
Edward is right. She wants to give in to everything he offers but that stubborn pride or her experience with her mum prevents her. Maybe this is what will free bwr to be his. Or maybe its another one if his manipulations.
Edward is right. She wants to give in to everything he offers but that stubborn pride or her experience with her mum prevents her. Maybe this is what will free bwr to be his. Or maybe its another one if his manipulations.
8/25/2024 c30 Sophie
This Fanfic is amazing! The writing is profoundly elegant, compelling and unique. I’m so glad I came across this story. I have read so many stories but not any of them is as distinguished, well written and so intense/heartfelt. I’m so obsessed with this story and excited to read more. PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE upload new chapters. Probably you have a lot of things to do in your life but I’m not the only one who is dying to see this story to be completed. The wait is very painful, specially when we thought that every week we would have a new chapter.
This Fanfic is amazing! The writing is profoundly elegant, compelling and unique. I’m so glad I came across this story. I have read so many stories but not any of them is as distinguished, well written and so intense/heartfelt. I’m so obsessed with this story and excited to read more. PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE upload new chapters. Probably you have a lot of things to do in your life but I’m not the only one who is dying to see this story to be completed. The wait is very painful, specially when we thought that every week we would have a new chapter.
8/16/2024 c30 Guest
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8/18/2024 c30 riann2
Good Gawd i love your writing! Every descriptive letter is perfection! You paint such a beautiful picture with your words! Thank you for taking the time to put them together for all your readers! This is my favorite story and I’ve loved following it all this time unworried of the time it’s taken you, i just really appreciate your willingness to finish it and share it with us ️
Thank you!
Rita
Good Gawd i love your writing! Every descriptive letter is perfection! You paint such a beautiful picture with your words! Thank you for taking the time to put them together for all your readers! This is my favorite story and I’ve loved following it all this time unworried of the time it’s taken you, i just really appreciate your willingness to finish it and share it with us ️
Thank you!
Rita