for Finding Home6/4/2016 c1 anonymous
please update, please.
please update, please.
12/5/2013 c1 bookXXworm
you should update the story. I wanna know what happens, but it's good so far.(:
you should update the story. I wanna know what happens, but it's good so far.(:
4/6/2013 c1 Complete Moron
Okay, my penname is 'No Name and the Lonely Machine' and, being the complete moron I am, I clicked the 'Post Review' button without actually typing my review, and I can't correct my mistake from my account - only one review per chapter. ANYWAYS...
YOU'RE BACK. Oh my God, I've read and re-read the original numerous times for the sheer, stupid joy of it, without any hope you'd update. AND YOU DID. I really love this revised version, hope you update again soon!
Okay, my penname is 'No Name and the Lonely Machine' and, being the complete moron I am, I clicked the 'Post Review' button without actually typing my review, and I can't correct my mistake from my account - only one review per chapter. ANYWAYS...
YOU'RE BACK. Oh my God, I've read and re-read the original numerous times for the sheer, stupid joy of it, without any hope you'd update. AND YOU DID. I really love this revised version, hope you update again soon!
3/13/2013 c6 
2Reverence of the Night Rain
I love this story and was crushed when it wasn't updated but either way I am just happy it will be back! If anything we readers owe you a thank you for picking it back up again! I will be eagerly awaiting the rewriting of this story.
Reverence of the Night Rain
2Reverence of the Night RainI love this story and was crushed when it wasn't updated but either way I am just happy it will be back! If anything we readers owe you a thank you for picking it back up again! I will be eagerly awaiting the rewriting of this story.
Reverence of the Night Rain
2/16/2012 c5 Sarah
Hello it's been months! Are u continuing with this or not because if u are, update already! If not, then don't keep us hanging, remove this.
Sorry if i sound mean.
Hello it's been months! Are u continuing with this or not because if u are, update already! If not, then don't keep us hanging, remove this.
Sorry if i sound mean.
11/22/2011 c5 1chocolatecheesecake23
D: how sad...but school sadly comes first . and i saw you told that chick off back in...may and june. still not off and i dont think she gave you credit...what are you gonna do?
1chocolatecheesecake23D: how sad...but school sadly comes first . and i saw you told that chick off back in...may and june. still not off and i dont think she gave you credit...what are you gonna do?
11/7/2011 c4 Guest
Discontinued?
Discontinued?
10/30/2011 c4 Guest
Whats happening here? Its not cool to not update. Put up an authors note or something! You at least owe us readers that much. This is really good but if you not going to continue with it then at least say so. Dont keep us hanging.
Whats happening here? Its not cool to not update. Put up an authors note or something! You at least owe us readers that much. This is really good but if you not going to continue with it then at least say so. Dont keep us hanging.
10/8/2011 c4 Guest
Please update this :) I love this story and sorry to hear about the girl that took your story :( but anyways please update :)
Please update this :) I love this story and sorry to hear about the girl that took your story :( but anyways please update :)
8/14/2011 c4 Roxy the Baseball Star
If you have really lost all interest in this story than i think you should perhaps put up an author's note or something then remove it. You only wrote four chapters. :)
If you have really lost all interest in this story than i think you should perhaps put up an author's note or something then remove it. You only wrote four chapters. :)