for Irken Erotica6/28/2017 c1 Guest
More mooooore!
More mooooore!
6/1/2013 c1 Guest
Who is Kit..?
Who is Kit..?
11/24/2011 c1 
9shifty53
uhhhh well it's hilarious, i'll give you that. it's slightly odd though, only because it's based on characters i've known since i was a kid. i can't say i like it though. but i know you have alot of potential, don't waste it!
9shifty53uhhhh well it's hilarious, i'll give you that. it's slightly odd though, only because it's based on characters i've known since i was a kid. i can't say i like it though. but i know you have alot of potential, don't waste it!
7/20/2011 c1 TheWumboNator
this is one of the best ones i have ever seen could you make altenete version but still foucases around the same but ni can do a difrent poisision every time also it seems that some words got cut out could you please edit it
this is one of the best ones i have ever seen could you make altenete version but still foucases around the same but ni can do a difrent poisision every time also it seems that some words got cut out could you please edit it
5/3/2011 c1 SomeVortPimp
I'm sorry but this is pure crap. it sounds like a 10 year old girl trying to be edgy by writing bad fapfiction. Zim is incredibly OCC and Kit is just a complete mary sue. This whole thing doesn't fit with the show one bit. And you're grammar as far as spelling and capitalization is terrible.. Please work on it.
P.S. If you never learn to take negative critique, you will never get better. Just some food for thought.
I'm sorry but this is pure crap. it sounds like a 10 year old girl trying to be edgy by writing bad fapfiction. Zim is incredibly OCC and Kit is just a complete mary sue. This whole thing doesn't fit with the show one bit. And you're grammar as far as spelling and capitalization is terrible.. Please work on it.
P.S. If you never learn to take negative critique, you will never get better. Just some food for thought.
3/3/2011 c1 1HangMansJoke100
Oh, sorry just cleaning the cum off of my keyboard.
I say throw tak in there...but your choice.
1HangMansJoke100Oh, sorry just cleaning the cum off of my keyboard.
I say throw tak in there...but your choice.