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4/1/2011 c17 10X-MJ-X
I have been trying so hard not to read this this morning - I didn't want to admit that it was fianlly going to be over...

:( :( :(

But I gave in and am i ever glad I did. I think i am even more in love with Derek than I have ever been and was wondering whether now this story is over I can steal him away from his wife? Although I must say the love they shared in this chapter makes me doubt that I could ever do that - Haha!

I adore little Clark and all of the loving descriptions of Penelope from Derek's point of view - it was jsut one big bundle of perfection and I have loved every single moment of it.

I get the feeling that their love will continue far beyond the ending of this fic and that Derek will never get tired of dessert!

What an excellent job you have done with this... I guess now i'll have to console myself with your latest creation - which is exactly what I'm going to do now.

Love Michelle x
3/31/2011 c17 5LanaLover
I absolutely love your story! :) I laughed,cryer, it became apart of me.

My only teweak would be the Baby's name. Adorable as it is Clark Jason is to close to Jason Clark Battle. Did you mean to do that? No bad feelings, just wondering.

Love ya and keep up the ah-mazing work
3/31/2011 c17 118KricketWilliams
So beautifully done. Nice job, hon.
3/31/2011 c17 66LoveforPenandDerek
a beautiful ending fitting for a beautiful story. Clark sounds like a real cutie, too.
3/31/2011 c17 8Dumb Human Like U
i loved it sad to see it end but love it and your were amazing in writing it
3/31/2011 c17 28sangreal7
As sad as I am to see this story ending, I don't think you could have written a more beautiful epilogue.

You captured the intimacy of their simple joys as well as the underlying aspect of what having their family means to Derek especially as he faces his job.

This was very, very well done hon, and I very much look forward to whatever is next from you.
3/31/2011 c17 Kimd33
I love the name Clark. It was a wonderful ending.
3/31/2011 c17 csimesser1
that was great loved it
3/29/2011 c16 10X-MJ-X
Ok, let me just recover from my misty eyes here a minute... That was just perfect honey definitely a nice little treat for me after a day at uni. It was just so beautiful and I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Love you lots for giving us lots of D/P love and loveliness...

Love Michelle xxx
3/28/2011 c16 56Leigh59
I do believe that he out did himself this time. The house and the ring were great but the heartfelt proposal now that says it all.
3/28/2011 c15 118KricketWilliams
Whew! That was mighty steamy. Nicely done. All those endorphins released makes for happy babies! :)
3/28/2011 c16 66LoveforPenandDerek
that was a gorgeous chapter brimming with love
3/28/2011 c16 csimesser1
that was really sweet loved it
3/28/2011 c16 28sangreal7
Beautiful! The house was even more wonderful than I had anticipated. The gorgeous proposal at the end was unexpected and all the more lovely for it. Very good job!
3/28/2011 c16 3Peanut84
Absolutely lovely! You've written a Derek everyone would want, and a Penelope who appreciates it! What more can we ask! :-)
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