Reviews: Magan no Naruto

for Magan no Naruto

3/6/2018 c5 partha
please write the next chapter soon

12/19/2017 c1 Rawrking
Shit fic.

11/23/2017 c1

46Hikari Nova
interesting but the 1st person P.O.V is a turn off

9/20/2017 c5 The Rupture
So this fic is abandoned, and has no chance for continuation.

9/15/2017 c2 Guest
Sasukes way to OOC its kinda creepy

9/15/2017 c1 Guest
I like the idea behind the story naruto having the mystic eyes of death perception but please don't ruin it by bringing other tsukihime characters in or trying to narutoize the tsukihime story it will just ruin Magan no naruto

9/16/2017 c1 PasiveNox
It's good:)

9/15/2017 c4

1OoOXylionOoO
Poor Naruto who doesn't understand anything.

9/15/2017 c3 OoOXylionOoO
What is this state Naruto entered during this fight ?

9/15/2017 c2 OoOXylionOoO
Well a filler chapter.
Thanks for the chapter.

9/15/2017 c1 OoOXylionOoO
Thanks for the chapter.
I first though that Aoko explanation of the lines were down right shitty. I mean you don't explain these line by you can see the future to a child.
But then she explained it much better to Naruto. These eyes is not something to fear but just another tool in Naruto's Pocket. A powerful and terrible one.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

9/14/2017 c5

46Hikari Nova
hmm interesting as long as the re-write isn't a 1st person P.O.V fic i'll enjoy it as I've read ALOT of 1st person P.O.V fics since I read this one that have been self inserts that have turned me off of 1st person fics

4/26/2017 c4 Guest
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1/9/2016 c2 Hikari Nova
VERY annoying to read a first person P.O.V fic please re-write this in 3rd person P.O.V

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