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2/23/2018 c4 James Birdsong
Cool
8/19/2014 c1 6swartzvald
Decent first chapter, don't hate the oc, which is unusual.
Oh and the past tense of lay isn't lied, it's also lay, it's weird, I know.
9/1/2013 c2 rev
I think that this Yasunobu guy is really interesting; you sure did a good job with how you characterized him. But to pair him up with Sasaki would be a great mistake, I feel. Especially if it's for some stupid reason like being "opposed to Yuri and shoujo ai."
8/8/2013 c3 47Hwikek
Anything that references Adam Savage is bound to make me feel giddy with excitement! 9/10 easy.
7/3/2013 c3 James Bidsong
Groovy. Cool. Nice.
4/12/2012 c2 28Fahiru
Haha, Kaorin's dream was awesome! Just like a real nightmare.

I feel a little bad for Kaorin, but honestly, I really like Sakaki and Yasunubo( I always want to call him Yasunobu, darn it!) as a couple, I'm. Actually finding myself rooting them on! This may have something to do with the fact that I'm sorta opposed to Yuri and shoujo ai.

As in the last chapter, Yomi and Tomo were brilliant.

You brought in the poor bike boy! I always wanted him to reappear in the story... I really liked the scene in the canteen, it was well done. If nothing else, Sakaki and Yasunubo( am I spelling that right? I'm on a phone, so I don't have any form of reference.) will end up being very good friends.

Ah! Komura's so creepy! I felt really sorry for that poor office worker
4/12/2012 c1 Fahiru
Haha, wow! I really enjoyed it!

Tomo and Yomi are great! Their interaction was totally legit! Chiyo-chan was really great too. But I loved Osaka the most! Her and Kagura are, like, my favorite characters.

Okay, I usually leave super long reviews, but I'm sadly in a hurry right now... I promise I will give a longer review for chapter two!
2/15/2012 c2 13Solarius Scorch
Nice to see you writing a romantic comedy for a change. You clearly know where you're going and have some ideas, maybe not the most original ones but oh well. You still need some help with the language, there are many grammar mistakes and, worse still, sentences are awkward. Good luck though.
2/11/2012 c2 James Birdsong
Bravo for both chapters
2/7/2012 c2 47Hwikek
┬┐Yasinubo=Yasunubo?

That was pretty funny.

Who the hell is Scott? And why is Kaorin always a lesbian?
2/7/2012 c2 332Miz-KTakase
Pretty good there.
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