for I Won't Let You Slip Away4/7/2011 c2 
29april upside down
This is really good! I wanna know what she said back! Did she lie or what? Grrrr...
Uuupppdddaaattteee pppllleeeaaassseee!
-April
29april upside downThis is really good! I wanna know what she said back! Did she lie or what? Grrrr...
Uuupppdddaaattteee pppllleeeaaassseee!
-April
3/9/2011 c2 21MaxandFang101
Oh no! You left me there with the, the, SUSPENSE! How could you? It's just staring there, looking at me. Do you Know how creepy that is? xD Loved the chapter! :D
21MaxandFang101Oh no! You left me there with the, the, SUSPENSE! How could you? It's just staring there, looking at me. Do you Know how creepy that is? xD Loved the chapter! :D
3/8/2011 c1 2D3R3K I5 B345T
I actually thought it was well written! I'm one of those
English Geeks but I thought it was very surprising.
2D3R3K I5 B345TI actually thought it was well written! I'm one of those
English Geeks but I thought it was very surprising.
3/5/2011 c1 7sILY2Q3
the names of his sisters sound so cutE! ^_^
other then that very interesting and detailed ahem starter then. can't wait for the next chapter! oh and we don't like it...we LOVE it! heheh
7sILY2Q3the names of his sisters sound so cutE! ^_^
other then that very interesting and detailed ahem starter then. can't wait for the next chapter! oh and we don't like it...we LOVE it! heheh
3/5/2011 c1 227storyteller362
I like this I really do. Hehe Patton's sisters reminded me of the ones I gave them, Julia and Macy. Well I like the story and hope you continue it soon.
227storyteller362I like this I really do. Hehe Patton's sisters reminded me of the ones I gave them, Julia and Macy. Well I like the story and hope you continue it soon.