for A Little History11/11/2011 c6 
6Catty Vancouver
I was a little confused by this because there isn't much plot or anything, but I still laughed out loud when they are trying to make small talk and Tobias says "I think the owl that lives in my meadow found a mate."
There was a lot of good dialogue in this ^_^
6Catty VancouverI was a little confused by this because there isn't much plot or anything, but I still laughed out loud when they are trying to make small talk and Tobias says "I think the owl that lives in my meadow found a mate."
There was a lot of good dialogue in this ^_^
10/27/2011 c6 4wingswordsandmetaphors
This one was sadder than the others, but it still worked. Great job on the whole story.
4wingswordsandmetaphorsThis one was sadder than the others, but it still worked. Great job on the whole story.
10/27/2011 c3 wingswordsandmetaphors
I just noticed that the POV's changed since chapter one. And when I looked at chapter two to see if it changed then, I realized it was all dialogue, no POV. Great job.
I just noticed that the POV's changed since chapter one. And when I looked at chapter two to see if it changed then, I realized it was all dialogue, no POV. Great job.
10/27/2011 c2 wingswordsandmetaphors
This is like humor meets angst, sort of. It's funny and serious at the same time, and that's really impressive.
This is like humor meets angst, sort of. It's funny and serious at the same time, and that's really impressive.
3/6/2011 c6 Jjhuggy
Best chapter yet
Best chapter yet
3/6/2011 c6 nomadsland
These ficlets were such a joy to read! The banter, dialogue, and characterizations were spot on and very amusing. Any one of these could have seamlessly been put into one of the books.
These ficlets were such a joy to read! The banter, dialogue, and characterizations were spot on and very amusing. Any one of these could have seamlessly been put into one of the books.
3/6/2011 c1 21HotPinkCoffee
These are fantastic. I laughed out loud for 2, 3 and 4, and 6 really brought home the stress of the war creeping in on their lives. They're all lovely, very witty banter, very funny, great sense of character voice. You absolutely nailed the rival-friendship chemistry between Marco and Rachel.
21HotPinkCoffeeThese are fantastic. I laughed out loud for 2, 3 and 4, and 6 really brought home the stress of the war creeping in on their lives. They're all lovely, very witty banter, very funny, great sense of character voice. You absolutely nailed the rival-friendship chemistry between Marco and Rachel.
3/6/2011 c5 CuG
Hahaha, I laughed through the whole chapter..
Hahaha, I laughed through the whole chapter..
3/6/2011 c4 ReviewedB4
I also just realised I have read all your stories! Haha! I remember reading 'The Thing About Grief' a few days ago. (I hate to admit it, but I love fics 'bout Rachels death! :) )
I also just realised I have read all your stories! Haha! I remember reading 'The Thing About Grief' a few days ago. (I hate to admit it, but I love fics 'bout Rachels death! :) )
3/6/2011 c3 TooLazyOnIpod
Very good, made me laugh! Everyone is in character and Rachel and Marco's 'insults' sound just like the books, only better! You, my friend, have a talent for writing, and I hope you post another story soon. Oh, and are you sure your not K.A in disguise?
Very good, made me laugh! Everyone is in character and Rachel and Marco's 'insults' sound just like the books, only better! You, my friend, have a talent for writing, and I hope you post another story soon. Oh, and are you sure your not K.A in disguise?