for A New Start4/24/2011 c4 
28theHuntgoeson
This is really good! I like your new team, and the scenes of Gene seeing Alex in the mirror, and of Alex breaking her heart in the Railway Arms, are so moving. Now Keats is back, Gene needs Alex with him to fight evil. Please write more.
28theHuntgoesonThis is really good! I like your new team, and the scenes of Gene seeing Alex in the mirror, and of Alex breaking her heart in the Railway Arms, are so moving. Now Keats is back, Gene needs Alex with him to fight evil. Please write more.
3/11/2011 c4 42Eleantris
Haha, a unicorn called Gene... he will be pleased. :P Brilliant chapter!
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42EleantrisHaha, a unicorn called Gene... he will be pleased. :P Brilliant chapter!
X =D
3/11/2011 c4 3Triple Integral
This story is great so far! You're doing brill - keep it up. I can't wait for more :)
3Triple IntegralThis story is great so far! You're doing brill - keep it up. I can't wait for more :)
3/11/2011 c4 71Jazzola
I like the sound of a unicorn called Gene, actually xD
This was great! Commiserations with not being able to save :L Looking forward to more!
Jazzola :)
71JazzolaI like the sound of a unicorn called Gene, actually xD
This was great! Commiserations with not being able to save :L Looking forward to more!
Jazzola :)
3/8/2011 c3 Jazzola
Ooh... *traps Keats in net* There we go, now I can draw on your forehead and warn everyone.
This is great! I love the little convo with Gene and Carly. I like it! Thanks for posting :)
Jazzola :)
Ooh... *traps Keats in net* There we go, now I can draw on your forehead and warn everyone.
This is great! I love the little convo with Gene and Carly. I like it! Thanks for posting :)
Jazzola :)
3/8/2011 c3 42Eleantris
Noooo! Not Keats! If you're bringing him back, you have to bring Alex back...pretty please? Hehe, sorry, do what you like...I'm just being whiny. :D I love this story, it's brilliant, and I really, really like Carly! I look forward to more.
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42EleantrisNoooo! Not Keats! If you're bringing him back, you have to bring Alex back...pretty please? Hehe, sorry, do what you like...I'm just being whiny. :D I love this story, it's brilliant, and I really, really like Carly! I look forward to more.
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3/7/2011 c2 71Jazzola
Can I call him Leapfrog? The unicorn... Just a little warning of what you shouldn't play with him.
This is great! I like it :) More soon?
Jazzola :)
71JazzolaCan I call him Leapfrog? The unicorn... Just a little warning of what you shouldn't play with him.
This is great! I like it :) More soon?
Jazzola :)
3/7/2011 c2 42Eleantris
Oh well, better contribute to the growing unicorn population then! :D This was a brilliant chapter, I love the idea of Gene getting Alex apparitions - that's lovely, and I've instantly warmed to Carly. I can't wait for more!
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42EleantrisOh well, better contribute to the growing unicorn population then! :D This was a brilliant chapter, I love the idea of Gene getting Alex apparitions - that's lovely, and I've instantly warmed to Carly. I can't wait for more!
X =D
3/7/2011 c1 Eleantris
This is a brilliant start! I love the unique way you've introduced us all to the characters, and the hints at Galex. I'm hoping there will be a return from Alex, and Galex, to come? *puppy dog eyes* Either way, I look forward to reading more!
X =D
This is a brilliant start! I love the unique way you've introduced us all to the characters, and the hints at Galex. I'm hoping there will be a return from Alex, and Galex, to come? *puppy dog eyes* Either way, I look forward to reading more!
X =D
3/6/2011 c1 7EightEminus
Like! Keep writing. Great from Gene's POV, especially as we know more than him (iphones, radios, etc).
7EightEminusLike! Keep writing. Great from Gene's POV, especially as we know more than him (iphones, radios, etc).