for You'll Find What You're Looking For At Walmart3/7/2011 c1 
1Jasper's temptress
OMG! I loved the first chapter, i'm so looking forward to reading more of this story. BTW, love your writing :D
1Jasper's temptressOMG! I loved the first chapter, i'm so looking forward to reading more of this story. BTW, love your writing :D
3/7/2011 c1 3Fenrisulfr
Have always loved this pairing, especially when not only Peter but Bella as well are wise crackin', asshole-types. Not to mention Badass! And the humor in this fic is simply epic, not that "Life Happens, So Just Roll With It" isn't funny, but Pete&Bella combinations tend to be a continuous hail of jokes and these are good ones!
Keep up the Awesomeness Mama4Dukes!
/Fenri
3FenrisulfrHave always loved this pairing, especially when not only Peter but Bella as well are wise crackin', asshole-types. Not to mention Badass! And the humor in this fic is simply epic, not that "Life Happens, So Just Roll With It" isn't funny, but Pete&Bella combinations tend to be a continuous hail of jokes and these are good ones!
Keep up the Awesomeness Mama4Dukes!
/Fenri
3/7/2011 c1 Nonita
I really love stories with canon couples, but I have a weakness for non-canon couples.
1 - Bella/Jasper
2 - Bella/Peter
3 - Bella/Carlisle
4 - Bella/Emmett
I'm completely sure I'll love this story too.
Anxiously waiting for more
Maribel
I really love stories with canon couples, but I have a weakness for non-canon couples.
1 - Bella/Jasper
2 - Bella/Peter
3 - Bella/Carlisle
4 - Bella/Emmett
I'm completely sure I'll love this story too.
Anxiously waiting for more
Maribel
3/7/2011 c1 mssmith
Good story, so far! I really do love Peter. The only Bella I read is either with Jasper or Peter. I should also say that the only Edward I read is gay Edward! Thanks for the new story, I enjoyed it very much.
Good story, so far! I really do love Peter. The only Bella I read is either with Jasper or Peter. I should also say that the only Edward I read is gay Edward! Thanks for the new story, I enjoyed it very much.
3/7/2011 c1 arrr
I am so pumped you are starting another story! And while I LOVE the Major – I love me some Peter! That doesn’t sound right, huh? And from the summary it sounds like you’ll be up to your old tricks – love and Wal Mart – ahhhhh! Just curious – have you seen “The People of Wal Mart”? The website is hilarious – I always have folks send me e-mails with the cream of the crop – I’m sure you’ve seen it but if not, check it out!
When I read this line “In the meantime, my gift was going into overdrive and it kept telling me, "Help her, fuck her, then change her, she's your mate fucker!" all I could think about was Animal House and the devil on Pinto’s shoulder saying “F**k her, f**k her brains out…”
And with BM it’s like we get two Peter’s for the price of me – all the better!
I really thought she was going to wake up and be PISSED (but your Bella never does what we expect)! Glad she rolled with it…life happens! Aren’t I funny – now you see why I leave the writing to you!
Props on another great line ~ "Oh, goody. My daddy will be happy. He's a staunch supporter of the death penalty for violent criminals."
A new story and another EXCELLENT chapter from the MASTER MAMA! THANK YOU!
I am so pumped you are starting another story! And while I LOVE the Major – I love me some Peter! That doesn’t sound right, huh? And from the summary it sounds like you’ll be up to your old tricks – love and Wal Mart – ahhhhh! Just curious – have you seen “The People of Wal Mart”? The website is hilarious – I always have folks send me e-mails with the cream of the crop – I’m sure you’ve seen it but if not, check it out!
When I read this line “In the meantime, my gift was going into overdrive and it kept telling me, "Help her, fuck her, then change her, she's your mate fucker!" all I could think about was Animal House and the devil on Pinto’s shoulder saying “F**k her, f**k her brains out…”
And with BM it’s like we get two Peter’s for the price of me – all the better!
I really thought she was going to wake up and be PISSED (but your Bella never does what we expect)! Glad she rolled with it…life happens! Aren’t I funny – now you see why I leave the writing to you!
Props on another great line ~ "Oh, goody. My daddy will be happy. He's a staunch supporter of the death penalty for violent criminals."
A new story and another EXCELLENT chapter from the MASTER MAMA! THANK YOU!
3/7/2011 c1 1ssssa
Hey this looks good! Shame that jas wnt be all sexy n badass with bella like you other story! But I likin this story! I jus have to say tho char and Edward WTF!9
1ssssaHey this looks good! Shame that jas wnt be all sexy n badass with bella like you other story! But I likin this story! I jus have to say tho char and Edward WTF!9
3/7/2011 c1 3fascinated
LMAO! That was HIGHlarious! And really the conversion between Peter and Brewmaster! Epic! Can't wait to see the confrontation between Victoria and Peter! And the shapeshifter that Bella fucked was this Paul? Please say yes, he is my favorite!
3fascinatedLMAO! That was HIGHlarious! And really the conversion between Peter and Brewmaster! Epic! Can't wait to see the confrontation between Victoria and Peter! And the shapeshifter that Bella fucked was this Paul? Please say yes, he is my favorite!