
5/6/2014 c7
4NCIS Jenny167
Great story, and written very good! Please, please continue! Love the idea of Tony and Abby as twins and I'm really curious about Ziva starting school!

Great story, and written very good! Please, please continue! Love the idea of Tony and Abby as twins and I'm really curious about Ziva starting school!
9/1/2013 c4 Guest
more tiva!
more tiva!
9/1/2013 c2 tivforeverilove
wowoowowoow
wowoowowoow
8/16/2013 c7 fan person
Hi! It's me again! So... I came back to see if another chapter was writen... Sad that there were still 7, but hey! I can wait! While I wait... I can... Um... Well who knows, but, I'll still be here. I mean! Maybe not at this exact page all the time, refreshing like every 2 seconds, but... Well, you know, I'll be checking in every once and awhile. :D!
Love your story! KEEP... ON... WRITING! :D!
Btw (By the way) Hope school doesn't get in the way... School is like... Quite boring to me -_-... But oh well! I'LL BE HERE! :D!
Hi! It's me again! So... I came back to see if another chapter was writen... Sad that there were still 7, but hey! I can wait! While I wait... I can... Um... Well who knows, but, I'll still be here. I mean! Maybe not at this exact page all the time, refreshing like every 2 seconds, but... Well, you know, I'll be checking in every once and awhile. :D!
Love your story! KEEP... ON... WRITING! :D!
Btw (By the way) Hope school doesn't get in the way... School is like... Quite boring to me -_-... But oh well! I'LL BE HERE! :D!
8/15/2013 c7 A Fan of YOU D
Incredible stories! O_O! I love it! And I love your funny, and sweet comments you, yourself leave at the end and beginning! Your so cool! And I do admire your stories! Please continue to wright, and I'll be waiting! :D! By the way, if you have any other stories, I'd love to read em :)! 9/15/2013 I finsihed the 7th chapter. PLEASE WRITE MORE! Oh and I'd advise a much more happy ending, no offense :'( But that is quite sad about the father, but other wise... GREAT STORY! :D!
Incredible stories! O_O! I love it! And I love your funny, and sweet comments you, yourself leave at the end and beginning! Your so cool! And I do admire your stories! Please continue to wright, and I'll be waiting! :D! By the way, if you have any other stories, I'd love to read em :)! 9/15/2013 I finsihed the 7th chapter. PLEASE WRITE MORE! Oh and I'd advise a much more happy ending, no offense :'( But that is quite sad about the father, but other wise... GREAT STORY! :D!
7/7/2013 c7 WithARebelYell
Why toi stopped writing this amazing story? :( I loved it and I think you should continue it. And I bet I'm not the only one who wishes that. :)
Why toi stopped writing this amazing story? :( I loved it and I think you should continue it. And I bet I'm not the only one who wishes that. :)
3/24/2012 c7 Guest
This was great it wasnt really in character but still something that would have been possible if they were teens.
This was great it wasnt really in character but still something that would have been possible if they were teens.